NoOne_Important_1486
of reading
208
Read books
Badges
6Moments
165
NoOne_Important_14862yrReplied to DaoistSevenPathsthat's not really true, you can show that in a way better way, then just being apathetic.
"For fuck's sake, why do you have to be so unreasonable!?... fine if you won't believe me, then, well I'll just have to shut you up with my fists I guess." Kyle stated and closed his eyes, he took a deep methodical breath,As soon as he said that, he took a deep breath, the air gathered in his lungs, filling them over their capacity and pumping vast amounts of oxygen in his muscles expanding and strengthening them, effectively increasing his speed, strength agility and brain capacity.- NoOne_Important_14862yrReplied to Om_
you mean yours? get off your high horse bro. cope
'Sorry, Steve. But I will compensate you later…' - NoOne_Important_14862yrReplied to L0WeeeG
I meant they didn't marry out of love
"Be careful out there," Sirzechs said to the leaving figure. Since today is not her day-off, he can't act like a husband to his wife. Grayfia is a strange woman, but Sirzechs loves her regardless. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to aedwards_120
because masterchef is a thing by then in korea
This book has been deleted. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to jivenchy
except that wasn't the scene, there was no sounds really. and they were guarding the door. even if that was the case the phrasing is awful
"Could it be that we are not alone? Are the guys outside dead now?" - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
apathy isn't attractive in light novels all it does is make it boring.
"For fuck's sake, why do you have to be so unreasonable!?... fine if you won't believe me, then, well I'll just have to shut you up with my fists I guess." Kyle stated and closed his eyes, he took a deep methodical breath,As soon as he said that, he took a deep breath, the air gathered in his lungs, filling them over their capacity and pumping vast amounts of oxygen in his muscles expanding and strengthening them, effectively increasing his speed, strength agility and brain capacity. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to Mike_coxlong
technically that only works if he can generate enough force to completley stop the effects of gravity and push past it. which would make just landing from that height perfectly fine the easier.
The past Kyle, before the 3rd delivery, would've actually screamed in panic by now, presently though jumping more than a 30 meters high building didn't seem much if a hassle, before his body could hit the ground he inched closer to the building wall and stepped on it, pushing his legs on them he directed his force from downwards to his sideways, effectively cancelling any damage that may occur from the fall, with this his legs won't hurt when he lands on the ground. - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
this is too much, like I get you wanted more interaction but this is taking it way ti far, it's just annoying.
Is Holding Hands Lewd? (Edited) - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
wasn't instead of doesn't
"Yaaay!" Kanna was very happy to get her request accepted. She tackled Kyle and hugged him with affection and adoration. Nuzzling her head in his torso cutely, she showed her love for her elder brother, she was full throttle on the way to becoming a bro-con, if she didn't already that is. - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
I don't think it's boring, I just think you could work on your scenes and polish them up a little.
To summarize he became a God through utter misunderstanding. His explanation ended, Tohru was in a daze, why wouldn't she? What she had just heard was similar to something made out from a poorly made fantasy novel, focusing on comedy and had a generic plot which at least 90% of people who read it would proclaim as boring. - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
thank God, im so tired of these mcs that completely break down and tell random people their entire life story for no reason
"I shouldn't have asked something pretty obvious, fine I'll talk.. it's like this…" Kyle started, he explained how he travelled to the past, of course he wasn't stupid enough to tell her about the system, he only bluffed by saying he had the inherent ability to create a spatial tear to travel to different dimensions, he also hid his ability to travel through universes, he downplayed his powers. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to PitchBlackDark
kinda is... it's not just a portal to other dimensions, it can also control time considering at his point 90% of the animes would've already happened. so he used the portal to timetravel which introduced the butterfly effect. though whether or not the author has the insight to include any serious implications of that is unknown
[ That's where you're wrong host, the Demon Slayer World is this world's past. ] - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
isn't it baking?
This book has been deleted. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to jayz2484
7 is lucky so maybe that's another reason?
This book has been deleted. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to Lustsifer
no he is a sadist because he likes inflicting pain.
Doma immediately dodged this, using his insane reflexes and speed, but he wasn't able to leave unscathed as a small nick still appeared on the left side of his neck. It would've been painful were it not for Doma's complete aversion and even slight enjoyment of being inflicted pain. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to GenYase
except his power isn't zero. he's not good at magic but his gauntlet literally gives him a base level of power. that's no longer an issue of issei and more the red dragon
"Don't underestimate Issei. He's my strongest pawn, after all." Rias finally interrupted her annoying monologue. - NoOne_Important_14863yrReplied to Majesty_pristine14
except it is, them being cautious at a noise is one thing. there are people outside and they would think they're them not that they are dead when they have zero reason to think that way.
"Could it be that we are not alone? Are the guys outside dead now?" - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
you won't be having it, makes zero sense, replace it with something like " Well it's not like you'll be alive to make use of my advice" or something similar
Before Doma could process what he meant, Kyle's fist was already connected to his abdomen shocking him further since he hadn't even saw him moving due to his initial shock, and words he didn't know was the last ones he would be hearing in his long life. "Next time, a word of advice, don't underestimate someone, well you won't be having it anyways, goodbye you son of a b*tch." - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
and you could replace him liking pain to him being sadist/his slight sadism etc
Doma immediately dodged this, using his insane reflexes and speed, but he wasn't able to leave unscathed as a small nick still appeared on the left side of his neck. It would've been painful were it not for Doma's complete aversion and even slight enjoyment of being inflicted pain. - NoOne_Important_14863yrCommented
replace leave with "get away"
Doma immediately dodged this, using his insane reflexes and speed, but he wasn't able to leave unscathed as a small nick still appeared on the left side of his neck. It would've been painful were it not for Doma's complete aversion and even slight enjoyment of being inflicted pain.