Dreoklevi

Impressed!

Great story!

Amazing novel! This story's a really original take on the traditional harry potter fanfiction and I have to say I'm really loving it. Keep up the great work!

Seems interesting. Never read this particular genre of fanfic but i'm interested to see where it goes. While the word count filler is a bit annoying, I don't think it's the end of the world...

Great story! I really enjoy the characters and how they organically meet. I do think some parts like taking Luke's first meeting with Annabeth and just inserting Alex is something I would avoid doing too much, but aside from that everything flowed great and felt original/organic to the story.

Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!

Despite having never actually watched twilight, the story is still fantastic and easy to follow. Really just an impressive job and I'm a sucker for stories about immortals from the beginning of time!

Overall very good story, with some elements being a bit overdone (like his weapon), making the character feel too strong and childish. Definitely worth a read despite this, especially as the author seems to be gravitating away from this in the later stages. Interesting dive into the powers the characters possesses and I feel the sarcasm from the books is well captured without feeling like the MC's a copy of Percy.

Absolutely loving it, the update pace is incredible and the story is pretty much perfect. Plot is really interesting and it doesn't jump the gun on making him a star, but gradually builds him up. Really excited to see where this goes!

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