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I like the story. I also like all the characters in the story but I don't like the MC. because MC is stupid. I have read it many story but I have never seen a stupidest MC like this before. every time I read the story I like it but when I read about MC doing something stupid I feel like punching him in the face. I am really frustrated about MC so if you don't mind can you change his character or personality or remove his stupidness. create a MC that has his emotion control and can understand many thing if no one tells him about any thing. what I mean to say is MC should have a general knowledge like other stories MC does. and don't tell me that you want to create a unique MC. everyone likes the general MC so give them the general MC.
it's a very good story. I have read 50 chapters. I don't think you should hurry in the story you should take time and perfect the story. what I mean is every time I am reading a chapter you telling your readers that to be first space but I like it slow and steady. that's why I think you should write more into the story different characters thought process and much more. I don't want this story to end fast. I want at least 2000 to 3000 chapter. and I hope you will release more chapter.