Veirum

Why do you even bother uploading you post maybe once a week you write something that takes 20 seconds to read yet it somehow always ends on a cliffhanger

I have one piece of advice can you not say atleast from the trainers perspective mega before the pokemons name surely the trainers would just call them metagross or salemance I understand saying it in the narrator pov but not from character pov

I think the 5 men per oar is a maximum like the biggest ships with large oars used 5 men for each but it says usually its 1 or 2 per oar

I think it would be more acurate if each oar had only one or two men for each

Will you update your other story

Will you cross this series with world of warranty because I really loved that part of the last version of this👍

Yes but it isn't force resistant the droid would still be held up by the force hk is a hunter that Implies it initiates the conflict not just held

I like the chapter but can you tone down the scenes where hk attacks the mc he has the force I feel like if this were to actually happen the mc would just hold the ftoid with the force until it gave in

He didn't you can see his activity he last done anything 6 days ago

He said that over a week ago