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No se, pero siento que debo dudar en algo todavía, ese momento donde la IA de alfred no respondio es sospechoso

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It's cool and I understand that the random character selection bothers you a little but it's more interactive this way. One more thing is that one of the dialogues says that Kale (MC) took the powers away from Bills (Beerus), I think the best thing would be for him to say that he erased the law on which his power is based to make it more intimidating ( giving them to understand that you can delete them too (perhaps it is poorly translated since I use Google Translate to read the novels on the page)

The chapter is good, remember also in parallel chapters to mention what those who will live at the MC do, they can be several people at the same time.

Honestly, it is better to see the change made, since although I did not know that it was wrong, something told me that it is not going where it should. Side stories such as what buyers do with their goods can be seen in additional chapters and the main story with the MC in first person

Author, I am confused with the story, about the speech he gave to the fog about his powers, what happened to Aizen and honestly, the direction of the story, I don't know where it is going. Could you explain it in a spoiler tab for those who don't want to know?

Espeliciacion

What? Is seriously?

Una pregunta, nacerá kakashi? o no, porque si el padre de might guy dice que ya va nacer pero kakashi tiene la edad de guy, así que lo que me viene a la mente es que fallo en las edades o es apropósito porque kakashi nunca nacera. One question, will kakashi be born? or not, because if might guy's father says that he's going to be born but kakashi is guy's age, so what comes to mind is that he missed the ages or is it on purpose because kakashi will never be born?

Con lo primero que ley solo tengo una queja es que tienes que escribir más contexto alrededor de los diálogos para que se le de sentido a lo que hablan, ya que para los que jugaron los juegos las cosas tienen sentido para los que no lo hicieron no saben que pasa solo con diálogo. With the first thing I read, I only have one complaint is that you have to write more context around the dialogues to make sense of what they speak, since for those who played the games things make sense for those who did not. They know what happens only with dialogue

Te entiendo tu punto pero recuerda que aunque no se real y sea como vr, la persona conectado siente dolor, hambre, sed, etc. Todo ese no lo tiene los vr, así que entiendo de siert manera porque creen que es real

Cada 2 o 3 capítulos puede poner el punto de vista de otras personas como este para que en la mañoria te concentres en Tristan

Alguien sabe donde está? (Does anyone know where it is?)

La novela está increíblemente interesante y aunque hables inglés o español creo, estoy muy expectante y los siguientes

Apuesto que se arrepentirá porque su madre muere, siempre cuando quieren desarrollar al prota matan a uno de su familia

Yo digo que la bacteria evolucionó o la hermana de la batería viene por venganza

!diablos si! ! No!

Author you could request with the system the fighting skills of the entire history of the manga "baki" and "kengan"

Author you could request with the system the fighting skills of the entire history of the manga "baki" and "kengan"