Did you know? This story sometimes makes one cry. Read at the risk of your manly tears.

This novel is not just a novel, it is a legacy like the potter series or star wars series. In the coming years I as a fan would like to read serpent king's story as another branch book of the series, even god war as a book.

boo hoo hoo I'm sad for shizune's pet pig's death.

pov changes add many small details to light.

this chapter does it! !! !!! bye

this is the best onepiece fanfic there ever was, is and will be.

Vegeta's used goods being fl is disastrous. Fortunately the author didn't do it.

Zoro

this fanfic is getting weirder by the seconds, I'm Outta here.

no harem,good.

well played

very poorly written.

cliffhanger! !!!

Frankly, the mc only provides info for the wars to be fought other than that he has little to no uses. Random POV of character in chapter like fillers were annoying.

3rd person writings

mc really is a psychopath, I thought at least after 15 years with his new parents some love had to be nurtured but no, still a cold blooded mf that has plans to love a women and their child talk about sarcasm. not offense, just my point of view(mama's boy point of view) English is my third language so there may have been some mustakes

For me the story was going well until the author decided to include to include 1 more cheater(otherworlder) in the story. No offense, just my personal preference.

MCs gay, right? or A sex-crazed maniac

getting cringey

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