Sorry for the comment ( and my bad english). This sentence should be "mia amata". Cars in the italian language use female pronouns. I'm really liking the story so far [img=recommend]

I think I understand, at least in part, what you mean. I would suggest you to try anyway. I don't want/like talking about talent, but most of the times what really makes you better is hard work.Maybe you won't write the best novel, but the experience will make you write a better novel next time. Good luck [img=Loving it]p.s sorry for my english, it's not my first language

I think it's a really interesting idea and I must say I would like to read more. It's only 12 chapters for now, but I hope this book will not be dropped. Good luck for the author and if there are haters just take from them what you think will help you write a better story. [img=Loving it] P.S. Please forgive my english, cause I'm italian.