well, you might find some punctuation, omissions and errors,

Hi, I am the author here to give a shameless review The quality of writing will improve with time, You will find almost little to no Grammatical errors. The starting chapters will have info dumps so do bear with it and continue reading. I will try to upload 4 to 5 chapters a week. That's all for now.

I am just the average novel lover, action fantasy and magic related novel reader. I hate this novel. I mean why is this damm novel so goood. I mean so goood that I just can't get interested in any other novels now what should i do. The mc development, the all round other characters, the emotions, Superb, fantabulous, i mean t The best in the town... 😍 ♥ And please anybody recommend any other novel like this one i mean it should be on par with this one

Again thanks to the author for continuing , the story has a lot of potential and unique. The is kinda getting more and more intresting. I hope the author never drops it. Continue it.

Hello mate , I followed your advice did some editing and corrected the spelling errors. If you read further, then please do comment your opinion

Thanks a lot and will do so, as i just directly post the chapters without editing. So will try and correct all the errors

Do read further if you like it, and point out my mistakes, And give your opinions . You are the only who had given it a try . Thanks

Hey mate I edited it and added some lines in between. Hope you like it 😊

Welp, you are right, i will edit it

Hi anyone , anyone who stumbled upon this and tried to read, this is my first work, and i started to write, if you somehow are able to read my work then thank you.

Do GIVE IT A TRY FIRST,, FOR ME TO HAVE THE POTENTIAL TO BE A GREAT NOVEL IS WHAT I TRY TO FIND, AND YESS THIS STORY HAS IT WHAT it takes to be a great novel, the author is learning and correcting his mistakes, i am one of the very first readers of the author and the story is now being developed well,

Wow that's a nice first chapter that you added, all the best and yeah there are a little bit graamar error but i know u will fix it sooner or later, ur writing has also improved, i could easily feel the described weather and bad omen it carried for the mother and children apart from the grammars and little hit corrections during the 1st 2 3 paras It's a fantastic chapter and a good idea cause we now have a attachment and emotion towards our mc

Nice one that felt realistic

😔 😔

Wow nice description

Yeah author, all the best to. You writing the journey

This story is really good and looking forward to its growth. It's not a generic rebirth, it has unique elements to its world, the author surely can develppe this one into a fantastic novel. I really want to see what the mc will do to regain his GRANDMASTER power and position or will the humanity survive and dominate the demons

Better , cause though he is a beggar theif and malnourished these types of people have experience the hardship and have better stamina and physically very flexible

Nice one

Let us leave this? 🤔 Place or what