Entertaining sports Novel. Really appreciating all the news updates and interviews which provide more insight and background to the story. Would like to see more character building and introduce 1 or 2 more characters to interact with MC. Flesh out MCs life outside the NBA and add a Friend that can go with him or increase Lawson and others roles. Since MC is from the Future have him talk to management about a couple of draft picks(1 or 2 allstars and role players). Hope to see 1 of his teammates from ABCD camp to get drafted to his team and he starts to develop his friendship with Brandon Roy, Iguodala and other nba players.

Interesting premise and a promising start to the story. Mc is interesting and I see some potential for his character evolution. Translation quality leaves room for improvement and certain expressions or phrases should be explained if mentioned repeatedly.

He has 4 children before the twins. Adding the twins makes 6. he is saying he is not nervous before the twins birth because he has already experienced the birth of his first 4 children

3 wives all 1 child so 3, 2 concubines 1 child and now Twins(2) so 6 children overall. 4 boys 2 girls. lu pingan, lu wuyou and lu wuyu, lu xile and now twins the author had his math done right apparently you guys forgot one of the daughters.

Thank you for translating this novelThere was a chapter about a night air raid on the pontoon bridge where the invention of the radar was described(supposed to be death ray to incapacitate pilots) but I cant find it anymore