Tempest_5916
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this guy's worst both in morality and personality even compared to some cultivation mc's.
aaaahhh I played it and I'm paying the price
If there is nothing i hold then sure
I know you probably won't do it author but I would like for the past Jareth to be avenged in a way by making the family in to a Fallen one as revenge
Mammoth clan created a bieng of vengeance understandably however he's ironically created more suffering in the extents to trying to eliminate his enemies by creating even more enemies.A full circle of hatred which I hope Inala ends
Ngl the Grammer has been affecting many of these sentences.They sometimes don't make sense have you tried using Grammerly or anything similar
That would explain why it's slow to mention important things to the host a good loophole for the author
I'm just guessing but it's probably low compared to the Protagonist of thr story and the other important characters
I know she's supposed to not be the brightest author but can you give her at least the brains to ask question if there is any trials your face for each cultivation stage.You seem to make the mc overlook overall too important details so these situations sometimes feel forced.
Milotic,Luxray,Gardevoir and Garchomp would be a hype catch
you understood the thoughts of a women!? Impossible
Bruh she's worse and than inala on manipulation