Ordinary_Husband

Well written, good interaction between leads

Can you translate a pole with sharp object at the tip is spear? Pike or lance wildo too. Don't use gun

Well, several characters have gender inconsistent. It's mood killer, especially for me who unable to guess character genders by their name. I'm just enjoying story, yet I'm confused by Protagonist's gender at later chapter. Hahaha

Well, a rare treasure appears. A loving family with their difficulties. Not brash like 'you look, I punch your eyes' book. Easy to understand as well. It seems immortal theme only set as background. Husband have his worries...

HAHAHAHA i found fiction again. what the fucking good

The best for sure. Recommended. No chinese novel symptoms.

well, everything nurse give is "good".

so far, this little fanfict is the best DxD fanfict. I'm poor soul, so I can only give you my blessings. hehe

repeated chapter?

very very familiar story. although it appears so late, the storyline is worthy. well, i have read it long time ago and accompanied my youth.