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Zero01010100

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2019-10-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101009mth
    Posted

    Good story, I like the character development of mc and unique direction story takes. What I don't like is lack of screentime of side characters, even his wife has only what? 4 pages worth of stuff if even that much. Most of it is just MC narrating, witch started to be boring after first 5 chapters. If only the author took time and showed us things happening, and not told us about things that are happening. Overall, good read, just because MC is not another pussy with morals from modern world that do not change after living in hellhole known as Westeros and somehow not only surviving but thriving.

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    Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Commented

    I don't know why but the dialogue feels wired. English is my second language so I don't have firm understanding. Can someone point out why?

    Ch 84 Rivalry
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    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Commented

    I seriously love this story, everything from character interactions to action scenes.

    Ch 27 A Look into the Past
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Commented

    just found out this story, quality writing man. I hope you get better soon :D

    Ch 8 Sorry...
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    My Sheldon Cooper-TBBT (The Big Bang Theory)
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Commented

    it's really anoying that for every story chapter there are 3 "question" etc. It takes me right out of the story. Otherwise it's solid, MC has reasonable motivations that you can expect from edgy teenager that has edgiest edge to edged. looking forward to more.

    Ch 21 Welcome to the Dark Net where everything is possible [ Hell on Earth]
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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Hacker System
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Commented

    first chapter was good, adding it to my collection just in case author starts writing again

    Ch 3 Hey Again, it's me
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    Tycoon System in Cyberpunk 2077
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101001yr
    Posted

    Quality writing. Badass and slightly psycho Martinez is just the thing I needed after watching Edgerunners and finishing Cyberpunk 2077 second time.

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    Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Nanites SON!
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Commented

    soooooo good!

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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    Twilight: We Are Venom!
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Posted

    This tar I'mted put amazingly, please continue to write! This tarted put amazingly, please continue to write! This tarted put amazingly, please continue to write!

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    Snow Curse (GOT SI)
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Thigs_0508

    Yeah, I realize now that I need to plan at least the main points of the story on the timeline before I start to write it :D Meh, everyone started somewhere.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Milkyone

    Margery Tyrell. Chick that died when Cersei blew up temple of seven I think.

    (A/N: I refuse to believe Ygritte is not 16+, this is somewhere around 1 year before canon and in the show, she looked at least 24! And if I am wrong about that let's just say in my fanfic she is older. Tormund too for that matter. Anyway, you can call this whole fic AU timeline. Happy reading!)
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Commented

    No chapter today, didn't have enough time to write one. I will try to release a longer one tomorrow.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Branching_Spirit

    I should not be. Max two girls so I can try to write some interactions and situations. I don't think I'm quite proficient enough to handle harem. :D

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Henri_Risius

    Absolutely not! They will either adapt, die, or leave. Their rapy wife stealing will get them killed by beasts in Evergreen since they are still munching on bandits now in Rainwood.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Werph

    I refuse to believe she isn't at least 16, this is a year or so before canon and in Show she looked at least 24!

    Richard turned around shapeshifting to Raven in progress and flying to find sassy and then hot ginger.
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to Nakpin

    She must be at least 16 already! This is a year or so before cannon starts and in the show, she looked like 24!

    Ch 17 Chapter 17
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to 0dinson

    Believe it or not, I actually wrote in my notes that he dies but when I was actually writing that scene I let him live, I don't even know why. :D

    Ch 16 Chapter 16
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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to KrooMorn

    Fixed! Thank you!

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    Druid in GoT
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  • Zero01010100
    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to AriesHellscyth

    Yeah, sorry about that :D Its fixed now

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    Druid in GoT
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    Zero010101002yr
    Replied to dope_is_my_name

    Fixed, got distracted and mixed up names :D Thank you!

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    Druid in GoT
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