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Good story, I like the character development of mc and unique direction story takes. What I don't like is lack of screentime of side characters, even his wife has only what? 4 pages worth of stuff if even that much. Most of it is just MC narrating, witch started to be boring after first 5 chapters. If only the author took time and showed us things happening, and not told us about things that are happening. Overall, good read, just because MC is not another pussy with morals from modern world that do not change after living in hellhole known as Westeros and somehow not only surviving but thriving.
it's really anoying that for every story chapter there are 3 "question" etc. It takes me right out of the story. Otherwise it's solid, MC has reasonable motivations that you can expect from edgy teenager that has edgiest edge to edged. looking forward to more.
Margery Tyrell. Chick that died when Cersei blew up temple of seven I think.
I refuse to believe she isn't at least 16, this is a year or so before canon and in Show she looked at least 24!
Fixed! Thank you!
Yeah, sorry about that :D Its fixed now
Fixed, got distracted and mixed up names :D Thank you!