in the Star Wars comics he explained that Darth Vader refused to heal himself, or to have more advanced armor. It was then that Palpatine himself offered to have him build more powerful armor. but he refused in order to atone for the mistakes he made, and to never forget his loss of Padmé. he uses the pain his armor gives him to strengthen himself through self-hatred and anger to become stronger.

it can be found on fanfiction(.)net I forgot to specify it

I highly recommend Coeur d'Arlan who definitely writes great stories, I have rarely laughed as much as with ''Knight of Salem'' each scene with Tyrian being hilarious. I also really liked ''the beast of beacom'' where the protagonist is not jaune for a change compared to most RWBY fics. but adam. or even ''service whith a smile'' which is one of the best slice of life I have read with Jaune

Merci

or maybe it's his child who will come to find him, it could be interesting.

personally i don't really like the mc, i find him uninteresting and stupid. I'm much more interested in the translating and rewriting work you do, so good job and I hope you keep up the good work.

I am for you to remove some of it's sarcastic comments. I think it has too much and it makes it unnecessarily unpleasant.

despite the pain of having to wait a month for the sequel, i'm at least glad the mc got a ticket to (rwby) which is a world i love. with some favorite mechanics and waifu.

En français : Je ne comprends vraiment pas pourquoi il y a tellement de personnes qui crache sur cette histoire... Certe ce n'est pas la meilleure, mais clairement il y largement pire trouvable sur se site avec de meilleures notes. Je comprends que la grammaire n'est pas top , mais sérieusement la grammaire ne fait pas tous de l'histoire. Cette histoire mais en avant des idées que l'on vois rarement et qui sont VRAIMENT rafraîchissante a lire par rapport à tous les fic qui sont quasiment toute des copié collé. the same thing but in English: I really don't understand why there are so many people spitting on this story... Certainly it's not the best, but clearly there is much worse to be found on this site with better ratings. I understand the grammar isn't great, but seriously grammar doesn't make history. This story but ahead of the ideas that we rarely see and which are REALLY refreshing to read compared to all the fics which are almost all copy-pasted.

Bon, je ne vais pas être le premier a en parler mais l'écriture certain moment est un bordel a comprendre. Et pour moi c'est le plus gros défaut de cette histoire .autrement j'avoue bien aimé l'histoire, clairement sa change de tous se que l'on peut trouver habituellement sur ce site.le mc ne devient PAS le plus fort ,le plus intelligent, et le plus beaux après seulement 3 a 5 chapitre comme se que l'on peut lire d'habitude et je trouve ça rafraîchissant. Après je dois prévenir tous de même qu'il y a quelque (nombreuses) blague légèrement... Borderline , qui je l'avoue mon fait un peu rire. Aussi pour ceux qui sont là pour le R18 cette histoire n'est probablement pas pour vous je suis au chapitre 31 et toujours pas de charbon . Ce qui n'est peut pas plus mal . Sa évite de se retrouver avec quelques choses de bâclé

J'en doute

Personally, I don't think the quality has gone down. and it is not because he became stronger that he became stupid, on the contrary he continues to find sensible solutions while other authors would be satisfied to make just the mc strong and to all succeed from first blow by brute force.

an interesting early author. you have my attention.

Un début ,un milieu et une fin de qualité.Je recommande cette histoire elle diverge des autres fanfictions de rwby que vous pourriez trouver .

Hi author, this is a question that may seem silly but are you going to make a link between the force of star wars and the force of the phoenix of Marvel? I say that because the two have similarities. an immortal, indestructible primary universal life force. She is also the nexus of all psionic energies that have existed, exist and will exist. Maybe I see similarities where there are none.

merci ,je me suis un peu inspirée du roman de Maxime Chattam si tu connais

for the knowledge that the system can offer I have some ideas if it can help: I don't know if it's a legendary or divine level but reality magic like that of wanda maximoff? in rare or epic, there would be technomency which makes it possible to control/manipulate technology thanks to magic. in view of how the mc and already overpowered I can see this knowledge only in rare, the magic system of the world of skyrim / elder Scroll illusion / destruction / alteration / healing / conjuration. epic/unique, unlock his aura from the rwby universe which in addition to providing him with a semi-permanent shield, allows him to have a semblance. and he can unlock it at his subordinate without his being enough to betray him.

to designate it, why not the tower of Sauron for the central tower? ^^ it could even make the eye as a surveillance tool.

I'm for Hermione. but if Hermione is not possible, harry can always make her his right arm. she does not betray her, smart and now she no longer follows the rule.