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Edilord5 years ago
Replied to Slothiticus
Thank you by the advice, the more I write, more I perceive my mistakes and will fix them, so I will study more. If you have more criticism feel free to say. Enjoy!
Ch 5 Crazy Women
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Edilord5 years ago
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Author here. The story in my mind has the beginning and the end, if you want something in the middle, I can put it in, if don't conflict my others ideas. Thank you for reading.
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Edilord5 years ago
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Author here. This is my first book, so he might have problems with the pace and grammar too, but I will do the best to make this an interesting reading. Enjoy!
Boredom Of The Gods
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Edilord5 years ago
Replied to leoreview1
Thank you, but I'll try get used to writing first. Thank you for the review, I hope you liked it.
Boredom Of The Gods
Fantasy · Edilord

Boredom Of The Gods

In the high realm a turbulence occurs and a way opens to the Earth, almost all humans and creatures undergone a mutation and gained powers. Lucas, a simple boy in the high school who is just a timid and a little lazy person, undergone a different mutation, how he will live peacefully in a society where flying and ripping apart edifices are common? Even with power everything can be solved? Chapter Length: ~2000 words

Edilord · Fantasy

34 Chs

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Someday a game with anonymous creator appeared, Magical World, and it's a instantaneous success because the game can affect the reality.Every new player has a whole dungeon created to himself, and they are very distincts, some monsters exist in almost every dungeon but has monsters that only have there too. The game gained popularity because when a player is in a dungeon his body is affected by his stats, so a thin guy can lift 500 kg there easily if his stats is high, and a big dude can run like the wind too.So the majority of the players treats that experience like gold. Just that only who play the game believes in these stories, because nobody proved the existence of these dungeons, they didn't appear in photos, people other than the players won't see that too, so the society treat those people like it being a collective trollers.But one year after the launch of the game the world really changed, dungeons appeared and monsters are everywhere, so humans are helpless and the heroes are those considered trollers players, with their support, humanity developed and stabilized in this new world. 10 years later William is a young man who just completed the school, but don't have a fixed dream so didn't go to college.He liked adventures and went to the dungeons regularly, this time he was not lucky... Chapter Length: ~1500

Edilord · Fantasy

23 Chs