Thank you by the advice, the more I write, more I perceive my mistakes and will fix them, so I will study more. If you have more criticism feel free to say. Enjoy!

Author here. The story in my mind has the beginning and the end, if you want something in the middle, I can put it in, if don't conflict my others ideas. Thank you for reading.

Author here. This is my first book, so he might have problems with the pace and grammar too, but I will do the best to make this an interesting reading. Enjoy!

Thank you, but I'll try get used to writing first. Thank you for the review, I hope you liked it.