I like the mix of Emma and Shaw it's fun but dangerous. I want to see how this progresses. something u ha w to say, though, is don't. have Peter get Emma, it would make sense for her and shaw to stay together.
The main problem I have with his story is that the mc is to forgiving allowing the Cullen to step all over him its fucking irritating so I have elected to drop it
Andrea nodded. "Fair enough," she shuddered though thinking how Gabriel would savor her lips, no kne wmhas ever been so daring with her before. They always ignore her because she is already in her early 30s and is very strict.
TWD: The Slice of Life of a Soldier in a Broken World
really in an hour come on he's not incompetent or overly fat
'Only 30 I am here for one fucking hour and only got done this much, huh… how come here one appeared there are no people nearby,' looking at the small [Curse] I commented.
Hey so I don't normally review or comment in the people who stuff I read but Iust say I really like what this author is doing so from me to the author keep it up man.