Solid as far as fanfics on webnovel go. But that doesn't mean it doesn't have its own problems. The first is that the pacing is not ideal, the whole story and deliverance drags. Another is that most of the plot points just come across as not very well thought out and cliche, more so in an idea drivel kinda way. But compared to most on this website, at least in the fanfiction section this is a very solid entry, especially for Daimachi.

Give me some time, I started this on the fly. I need some time to plan things out. Will probably start posting again soon.

I mean I could. I hundred percent could. But the question is am I going to?

It is but I'm leaning towards the MC being more of an average joe. Not somebody who would just swim through this new world.

Thanks, though I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks like this. I was just as bad my first watch through, it's only on repeat viewings that I paid attention to the details.

Probably better than what I was thinking tbh.

Lol, do you have powers or something? I just went to check which paragraph you meant and it says the paragraph is deleted.

I think it makes enough sense, but if that's how you feel, then fair enough.

When you say it like that sure, doesn't sound redeemable. But under the context of his actions, guilt, the apocalypse and his own mental state... Yeah, it becomes a bit more ambiguous.

Well, that's just my view. I can't do anything about that. I see both Shane and Lori as redeemable. I thought he was redeemable even up until Rick killed him. He's still unhinged and emotionally dependent on Lori, but deep down, I think he is a good person. So it's not so black and white. It might blow up in the MC's face, but things will be what they be.

It's not that deep. Neither did anything wrong. By all stretch of the imagination, Rick should have died in that hospital. It is honestly a miracle he wasn't killed by soldiers or walkers. And In Shane's shoes, it was almost impossible to save him when the whole place was getting overrun, and the soldiers were shooting on sight. So he was right to believe he was dead. The fact he even tried just speaks volumes about the strength of the relationship that was shared between the two. And as for the whole cheating debacle, again can't really blame either. Shane was reeling from guilt after leaving his best friend to die, unable to save him. And was struggling to deal with the weight of his actions, and Lori needed somebody to take care of her and her grieving child in an apocalypse. So she latched onto Shane, and he latched onto her as a way to keep him going. As for the coldness, I've rationalised it as their marriage was finished even before the zombies. You can say it is AU, but personally, it is strongly alluded to in the show. And besides, that fact, with the MC being a different person from the original Rick, there is a sense of distance. So he hates neither. He still cares for Lori, but just not as strongly. As for forgiveness, it isn't easy. But if Rick could do so in the show, even with the lingering attachment to Lori, then I can see him doing it again easier when there is less emotion involved. I've rambled enough; I hope I've explained myself clearly.

Despite how he appears he isn't a very emotionally resilient person.

Those were about my thoughts as well. I can think of a lot of material in many episodes that could be skipped over in a few words.

I'm not entirely sure about what you mean. But my thoughts were, firstly he fell because number one he has just got out a coma and his body is a mess, the gunshot wound still affecting him. But also this is his first time killing, At least so up close and personal. I would imagine it would be a visceral experience for anybody. But compared to Rick he isn't so affected so much by the act but more his body instead. I feel how poor his body after a coma should be was massively underplayed.

Usually in fits and starts. But maybe I'll stay consistent this time who knows. This account is more for me to just get off any ideas anyway so I'm not really stressing about it.

I mean I thought about it and beside his dead wife I couldn't really see any reason why he would want to stay.

Yeah I was thinking the same. Shane also, emotionally speaking, needs Lori. He is one of the people who has been hit extremely hard by the apocalypse. Without Lori and Carl he was likely to have killed himself in the early days, hence his reaction when he loses Lori and Carl. That was tantamount to losing everything to him. But Lori, isn't as bad as your making out. And she certainly didn't betray Rick, not when it was all but guaranteed he was dead. But their relationship was doomed before the apocalypse anyway. It was already beginning to fall apart and I'd bet she was already having thoughts of being unfaithful before everything.

It was neither's fault. It was a product of circumstance. Shane needed something to keep him going in the new world. And Lori needed someone to comfort and protect her and her child. Especially when they thought Rick was dead, nobody is at fault. But just because rationally nobody is at fault, doesn't mean that emotionally Rick wouldn't be angry at them. Just as in the show he was fuming but at the same time understood and let it go.