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CH1LLGUY

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  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUY2 months ago
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    This will be a sincere review. To start, I think this author has so much potential. The writing and structure have been clean so far. It is above average for web novel terms. Most times, I expect errors and bad sentences, especially for a novel that is fanfiction. So just that in itself wows me. The system down to the way he gets rewards I like. The bad reviews for this novel I can understand. I just think they are exaggerated. Most of them call out the character. I admit, that the MC personality can be a bit too much and takes a long time to develop. It just doesn't warrant to give the novel a two or one star. If I personally didn't see it from another review. That the MC will change in chapter 70. I maybe would have dropped it. My problems with the novel: I personally don't like how long it took for his character development. I think after the first two times of his same drunk crash out. We could tell how he is. It got a bit too dragged out by doing it a lot of times over and over again. I just think that the true story starts around chapter 70. Since then I have loved this story. I hope author if you read this, that you can go far with it. Although I understand that the novel is intended to be practice for you. Conclusion: The story is great besides mc annoying personality that takes a bit too long to change.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUY6 months ago
    Replied to SPIRIT_KING

    I agree, It feels like a big yap fest. So many words said, but no progression.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUY8 months ago
    Replied to SMiLeY1262

    I mean, i like his abilities, and he has cool parts. it just gets annoying as the author nerfs and takes away those options abilities. Kinda makes no sense to even give to the mc. so it kinda is torture for the readers.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUYa year ago
    Replied to DaoistArbore

    yes, his fairy comes back, but only for him. Right after a battle, he can't see her for a while. even to the latest chapter 1300, where i stopped. He still hasn't fixed a certain situation where he can talk with his fairy. Nuri SLIGHT SPOILER in some way meets with the mc. Elena is just a bunch of drama. I don't like her. After a certain conclusion. she still hasn't been with the mc. All in all, mc women aren't even with him in the latest chapter. Due to a problem that occurs.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUYa year ago
    Posted

    typically awespec novel that kills its potential. Mc gets op abilities that author nerfs every second he can get. author makes mc filled with pride but is somehow supposed to be different than prideful arrogance. Making every encounter avoidable, but i guess plot. author makes the first thousand chapters a tutorial only to open up a whole new power system. Author word padding is godly wasting 10s of chapters. probably has a Dao of padding. mc harem and women are worthless. mainly because the author can't give them screen time. which kills the immersion. Overall, I kept reading to the end because I just liked the powers. besides that, I would have dropped.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUYa year ago
    Posted

    I don't even know where to start. review somewhat of a spoiler. I'm caught up to the latest chapter. which is chapter 468. I'll just list pros and cons.pros: good r18 scenesGood world background and is interesting. cons: horrible grammar, usually am lenient, but it is pretty bad.idiot Mc brain dead McMc only relies on the systembland npc Mchorrible system until chapter 400 spoiler!!!!!!!!!!!!: system was presumed to be an old man leeching on Mc. Pretending to be his friend. Until he could gain everything. System fixes itself, which kills the old supreme fake system old man. It gets better because the system seems to actually be a system now. Helping the Mc grow. Mc spams one spell and brain-dead rushes enemies.Mc never learns any information for himself. He always asks for the system this and that. when if he actually just got information or put effort himself. He would have never had so many problems. Overall it has so many problems. If you have stuff to read, don't choose this. if you don't have stuff to read like me. I would say go for it with your brain turned off. I think the author seems to have a creative mind and potential. He just has to work on his mc and writing big time.

  • CH1LLGUY
    CH1LLGUYa year ago
    Posted

    mc is basically op with no character development. side characters have more development than the mc. if you are looking for an evil mc kinda dense op mc. I think you'll like it. would have been a bit more lenient for the rating. Just decided to be a bit harsher. Since it seems this novel has people boosting the reviews. review from chapter 100 decided to drop.