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Sabrina_Claire

Sabrina_Claire

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Hi my name is sabrina and my second name is claire i im 10 years old and i love to make story and i want to draw,dance,sing and of coures study like,reading,writing

2019-10-16 JoinedPhilippines
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    Sabrina_Claire3yr
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    the story is new for me. you know the setting and plot itself. I also like the imagery but i think that the more you write, the more you'll develop this particular skill. for me, the story still lacks the emotion but i also know that you will get better with it. language wise, i could clearly see that you have a command in using the english language. overall, i really love it. even for a novice like you. keep it up!

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