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fortune_cookie2yrCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9 The Military Man- fortune_cookie2yrCommented
lime lol think you mean like
"I forgot they love the cold too...." I said and shook my head to the thought of freezing to death. Demons couldn't deal with the cold lime dragons and angels, so we could freeze in about three hours in the cold. As dragons and angels can stay in the cold for days and not get cold or freeze to death. I know that Destiny and Emily could use their magic to keep warm, but I was stuck with the time limit. Saying something would have made them worry about me than the mission at hand. Adam and the other boys should be focus on the battle. - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
fix the last sentence
It was finally the day that Adam and I were waiting for. Our first S Class Mission and we had to work together with another group. But I have learned that Adam doesn't like to work with others. It took only a couple of months you get him to trust me. The only this was that the other group will ruin that in a heart beat. - fortune_cookie2yrCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7 Memories
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shade should be jade
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check the second sentence it sounds weird
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this is a story I know she is really excited about we've worked and talked about this for a long time and personally it's one of my faves that we've created but if you like this one you'll really love the second book which goes into more detail and romance of the character personalities and their silly antics I would recommend this story to anyone not only that love zombies and romance you'll like it please leave comments likes and support this story so that she can feel supported and keep writing🥺 I personally know how hard she works to make these stories and how much how much she loves created them.
- fortune_cookie2yrCommentedCh 23 Chapter 16 Training Day
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fix the first sentence it sounds weird
He walked over to an with less trees and wash more of a grass like area. Stood there and waited for me to come forward. It is a good idea for us to learn about our own abilities and push each other to our limits. So I walked over and summon my most powerful sword, the Petal Blade. A thing point blade with metal wrap around with a thorn look and the handle looked like three petals with a torn in it. This blade was dangerous, but was known for it great speed and healing abilities. The only thing was that it took blood from the welder in combat. - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
booking needs to be cooking
I sat there fixing the tent and figuring out how to tell him. At ask him how he would feel about a friend lying to him. The tent was at least big enough to fit two people and for our bags to be inside. The booking supplies were next to the campfire and everything else was in the tent. - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
I think you mean mind not middle
I didn't know what to think as Destiny kept calling me to come down. By bag was packed and ready, but my middle wondered to other things. My father was forced to leave and I don't know what is going to happen in the future. But I was snapped out by Adam grabbing my shoulder. - fortune_cookie2yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3 Willow Sweet Willow
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fix shot gun
"Agreed," she smiled and walked inside. Looking to see what was there for us to take with us. I didn't know was I needed, but it should be normal pistel ammo. But after a while Jade started to scream with joy. Looking over to see that she had a shock gun in hand with two boxes of ammo. - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
I love the name
"See you next class," I smiled as the bell rang. Soon after I left I hear Noah dying "Maybe next time" before out the door. My next class was my favorite, Creature History with Mrs. Berry. She was half serpant and human from the Dooms Kingdom. Which was across the world and covered in desert. I only been there once to capture criminals and somehow did it without Destiny and Emily knowing. - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
Lacey plz don't stop writing you are doing sooo good and I love helping you with us in hearing you talk about it it makes me happy to see how much you're enjoying it just like we used to when I was a freshman year we made it I love you and keep doing good work xoxo your best friend
Ch 20 Question - fortune_cookie2yrCommented
and this
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look at this Lacey
"Hey," Adam said with a smile