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The story is pretty good, but the writing, which uses AI, is acceptable but needs proofreading. There's too much unnecessary information, too many words that don't belong in the dialogue, which ruins the immersion. The dialogue needs to be reworked. I don't understand how some people manage to read it without cringing.
I don't understand this kind of story. I've read all 183 chapters and I can sum it up in one word: SUFFERING. Out of the 183 chapters, I've read nothing but suffering. From the first chapters, we understood that the world is harsh, especially for the human race. When the MC met the Elf and she realized his special soul, I thought that maybe she was going to use him as an experimental subject to make a weapon. In this way, if the subject of the novel is suffering, then this suffering is justifiable because he can gain strength. But nothing, from chapter 1 to 183, the MC hasn't evolved one bit. I don't understand this story........ WTF
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Dear Author, I wanted to know something about this story. WHERE ARE YOU? There aren't many novels of this quality, it must be continued!!! COME BACK!!!
Do you have a site to read it because what I found was missing some chapters. Thanks!
I don't think it exists. I searched a lot and I found a raw: Double comparison with Naruto, this Naruto is too stable. But it has nothing to do with this version. So I think he modified it a lot or else I don't know how to search.