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Alpha_Blitz

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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz30d
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    I dropped CA a couple year ago after a many many chapters, but I come back to it and others of this author because his stuff just makes me laugh and smile

    Get FUCKED!
    Library of Heaven's Souls
    Fantasy · ClasslessAscension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz1yr
    Commented

    Insert shadow the hedgehog speech about beta cucks here

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    Hitman with a Badass System
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz1yr
    Commented

    You like men! You like kissing! You like, men kissing!

    "Men!"
    After I Maxed All My Weapon Proficiencies
    Eastern · Weapon Master
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz1yr
    Replied to Jude_Madakor

    Even normal humans can echolocate well enough to play high intensity sports like football and skateboarding, and even tell what materials things they "see" are made of based off the properties of the echo.

    That was bad, and when it happened for the first time, Nial had almost been overwhelmed.
    Odyssey of the Blind God
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz1yr
    Commented

    Keep it up man, been absolutely loving this so far. Definitely up there with my favourite novels ever.

    Ch 176 Starting With Bad Luck?
    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy · SomDxD
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Commented

    I want to see Josh wipe the floor with gene corp, they dont have skills, just strength if i remember right, so they won’t even be able to hit him

    Ch 168 The Pirates
    Classless Ascension
    Urban · ClasslessAscension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Replied to Amon_Angel_of_Time

    No im first

    Ch 158 Fighting Iron Men! In Your Face!
    Classless Ascension
    Urban · ClasslessAscension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Commented

    I like how it seems as if Josh is getting more and more used to the world, he is willing to just mess around a bit more.

    Ch 156 Josh: Fastest Man Alive!—Not Always ;)
    Classless Ascension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Replied to Miki_ept

    I don't know for sure about the future but like, the MC really doesn't seem like that kinda guy.

    Classless Ascension
    Urban · ClasslessAscension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Replied to ClasslessAscension

    Look up "pikachu onesie guitar" and you'll see exactly what that made me think of.

    Ch 150 Josh The Yoga Master!
    Classless Ascension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Commented

    Can I have one of those duck pajamas? They sound like heaven.

    Ch 150 Josh The Yoga Master!
    Classless Ascension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Replied to Alpha_Blitz

    I realize I didn't mention the writing quality. That was because it felt so natural to read I forgot it was even a factor, I normally try to correct even small errors when I can, but even if there were a couple in 149 chapters I didn't notice a single time that something sounded off.

    Classless Ascension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Posted

    Review written after reading up to the last chapter as of posting (chapter 149). Honestly this is the best piece of writing I've ever read, the review will be divided into parts. 1.Josh 2.Other characters 3.The world 4.Story 1. Josh both caries along the whole story and also just feels like a viewpoint for the rest of the world. He manages to be funny in a very human way rather than just saying "he told a joke and they laughed". He has depth and background as a person but also has more aspects to him, he can be realistically funny, sad, happy, desperate, and even clueless. Do you know how hard it is to write a clueless character that doesn't make you cringe? I have never seen a more human feeling character that still has unrealistic strength and perseverance. 2. The side character all have real personality, real devotion and reasoning. They complement Josh just as much as thy do the story or world-building. They create a place, community, and group that doesn't just feel like an excuse to leave the tower. The author never creates a scenario or relationship just to throw it away and forget about it. It truly feels like they're a society with groups and levels rather than just MC, MC friends, MC enemies, everyone else. Which is what a lot of novels tend to create. 3. The world is less of an aspect than you might expect from what I've already said. The world in the novel is defined less by easy or literal descriptions and more by the characters and relationships. It doesn't matter where exactly the cities are, where exactly the tower is, where he even lives. You learn about the general world, technologically advanced human world that had a tower show up randomly, but then the characters teach you about the rest. I don't know where districts of the city are, but I know how the characters feel about the areas and what the place feels like instead of what it looks like. 4. The story is simple, it isn't meant to be about the mystery of the towers or the other worlds, it isn't about Josh's struggle to survive. It's about Josh, just Josh. It's about understanding him, how he proves he can do this, how he thinks in an unorthodox way and influences the people around him. It's the story of Josh Malum and his adventures, both personal (climbing the tower, finding something other than his girlfriend to care about) and public (teaching people, changing the tower, gaining attention, helping his friends). I don't think I can do it justice trying to condense it down into this tiny little review, but I 100% recommend reading this.

    Classless Ascension
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz2yr
    Commented

    This is super interesting so far. The magic system is quite well developed already, but that might be both good and bad. I just hope you make sure you have plans for how to expand it further when he gets stronger, after all, you can only think one thing (or rune) at once and thatll end up feeling clunky as a system later. Something like layering and combining runes would fix it but in general that might be a problem with how well youve already done.

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    The First Wizard
    Fantasy · laylag145
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Commented

    I started this at the perfect time. A day after I finish the current chapters you come back and upload another!

    Ch 121 Warmness of Home!
    Galactic Technological Library (Reupload)
    Sci-fi · sakakoi
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Commented

    Saying “soon, Greed immediately” is contradictory and halts fhe flow of the scene

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    I Got An SSS-Grade Unique Skill 'Extreme Luck' As My Starter Skill!
    Fantasy · Khier
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Replied to Andrew_Edwards_8992

    Yeah thats a pretty accurate representation of the US

    But it was different in San Francisco, which was two hours away.
    The Magic Apprentice: My Cells Have Mutated
    Fantasy · Drink And Play
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Commented

    Do you read other novels? If so what ones do you like? I gotta read some good ones while I wait for more fp to read this.

    Ch 82 Ravaged Heart
    New World - A New Beginning
    Fantasy · kenkan
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Commented

    No ones bouta comment on San Francisco being here?

    But it was different in San Francisco, which was two hours away.
    The Magic Apprentice: My Cells Have Mutated
    Fantasy · Drink And Play
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  • Alpha_Blitz
    Alpha_Blitz3yr
    Replied to Gili

    Its my favourite kind of bad writing

    Ch 1 The Paradigna Shapeshifters - Chapter 1 (Introduction)
    Supreme Lord Shapeshifter
    Fantasy · Krizantem
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