Lazy_writer
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amazing chapter! I'm excited, and very hopeful for the next chapter, I can't imagine how everyone will react when they see Peter turn into spiderman [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
P I just found out about his return author -sama What excellent news!, It's good that everything went well, If you can, continue with the story, but always remember to put your health first. blessings and luck[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
is incredible The story reads smoothly and is very interesting. I will eagerly await the next chapter. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
these types of stories are the ones that I love to read, good development, the plot moves well without being forced The protagonist is great but not invincible. 10/10 you are great author[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
a bit forced but ok, if you ever rewrite or edit this chapter, IMHO it would be nice if you explain that Takeru induced in hana's mind what Takeru desired, For example, some Takeru clone whispered to hana every night when she slept what Takeru wanted, I think that would explain the girls' way of thinking.