Daoist781234

Hey! Thanks for like! I recently wrote a 3 chapter short story, so I'd love to get your feedback) [img=recommend]

I really enjoyed the story! The continuation of each chapter is especially intriguing. Of course, I would have liked a better reveal of the characters' history, but since it's a very short story, it's okay [img=recommend]

I like the writing style! but God, how annoying it is in rebirth novels when parents are too strict with their children( he's just 5 years, don't yell at him!