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Junseo_Yi

Junseo_Yi

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2019-10-10 JoinedSouth Korea
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Replied to DaoistwLIhb2

    is there something im missing

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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Replied to Drip

    what happened there bud.

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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Posted

    if u liked mvs and are a sadist with mental issues u will like this. i would have liked to give no rating since this is so subjective, you will either enjoy it or despise it with every fiber of ur being.

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    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Commented

    again, author san? hes talking in the first person so why is he acting like hes in the third person???

    Ch 106 106 - Ace
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Commented

    what is with it with these weird chapters where he explains everything in excruciating details and talks as if he is a narrator doing a recap

    Ch 105 105 - First Blood
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Commented

    this is what the narrator would say in first person and its really weird

    Ch 98 98 - Chad
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Replied to Mus69

    :c i couldnt get to it fast enough to enjoy the lands of free chapters. now i am forever doomed to rot behind the great paywalls where i shall be buried

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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Commented

    what a great examination, he must be a genius

    'Okay, as one has already died, dealing with the other two will at least be less of a problem,' Noah examined as he fended off the little green goblin who was attacking him with a sword amid wild screams.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Replied to ColorBeast

    didnt the author say that his sister was already being taken care of and the hospital bill had already been paid. the only one suffering from not taking the loan is himself

    Noah knew how important a true friendship was after seeing countless people turn their backs on him when the Blessing he awoke was only Rank F. He didn't want the friendship he developed and built with Carlos to end because of money, so he never accepted any money from Carlos. The only chance he would take money from his friend would be if his little sister was in danger and he didn't have the money to look after her, but he still hadn't reached that point.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Commented

    turn off water?

    On the other hand, there were seven adults concerned about the family that waited for them outside the fortress: the family that needed money to buy food, to pay for electricity, to turn off water, to survive. Just thinking about the possibility that they might not be able to get out of this fortress today and thinking about what their family outside would have to go through had already made everyone there afraid.
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Posted

    I really like the story so far, and I think it has a lot of potential. However, the grammar issues here and there take away from the experience that the amazing story provides. If the almighty should accept, I'd like to proofread this work, free of charge.

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    Bloodlines of the Ancient Pantheons
    Fantasy · Immanioripse
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  • Junseo_Yi
    Junseo_Yi1yr
    Posted

    This is a good novel. It is my novel. I am the most handsome person in the world. 140 characters are too much. Please just let me post my review. Finally.

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    Roseheart System
    Martial Arts · Junseo_Yi
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