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Lelouch2208

Lelouch2208

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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22088mth
    Commented

    I knew you would come back, I really liked this FF, especially for the way you developed the harem little by little and not only added women as stupid, and although I had come to this FF looking for a harem, I really liked how you developed the MC and Eriri's relationship, to the point that I prefer that you focus more on Eriri (on perverting her a little more 7w7r) than adding more members to the harem

    Ch 116 Ch 114 - 07 June - A New Morning
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    Stealing Heroine: Honestly, I never thought this far. (R-18-Rewrite)
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22089mth
    Replied to llaube

    ¿Y eso para qué sirve? Llevo en Webnovel desde hace años y aún no sé qué función tiene XD

    Ch 11 Capítulo 11: SI o NO
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch220810mth
    Commented

    Thx for chapter

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    Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented
    Ch 9 Capítulo 9: Ira
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Replied to DaoistREvHkJ

    Había requisitos para publicar una reseña???? Porque nunca los tuve? O fue recientemente? Aunque llevo leyendo aquí como 6 años....

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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    .... MC and his Mother...... nop, if u want torture his mind, the NTR should be with all Might

    Ch 7 Villain System Pt. 2 [Ecchi]
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Posted

    Me gusto mucho tu historia, la trama aunque un poco lenta, tiene un buen ritmo, a mi parecer el autor hizo bien en llevar el ritmo de la historia de esa manera. Me gusto que la primera heroína fuera Eriri, y ojalá no la vaya a descuidar por andar con otras. También sería interesante ver una escena en la que el sexo entre Kouta y Eriri fuera más vanilla al punto de volverla totalmente adicta al MC. En cuanto a las demás heroínas, sinceramente es cuestión de gustos, aparte de Eriri, solo Sakura y Utaha me gustan, el resto era como un "Meh". Autor! Vi por ahí que iino Miko(kaguya) estaba en la lista! Agregala al Harem pls!!

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    Stealing Heroine: Honestly, I never thought this far. (R-18-Rewrite)
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    La apariencia del MC

    Ch 1 Capítulo 1: Nuevo Capitán
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    Thx 4 chapter

    Ch 25 Chapter 24
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    Nel, man, go to the doctor first

    Ch 25 Chapter 24
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    I still want chiwa's time

    Ch 23 Chapter 22
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    Team chiwa OwO

    Ch 14 Chapter 13 (Light R-18)
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Commented

    Thx for chapter

    Ch 21 Chapter 20
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Posted

    for me, the best naruto fanfic. Some people complain a lot in the comments that the MC is very weak, that he hasn't done anything in the 10 years that he has been living in the world of naruto. And that after getting the Tenseigan, he's still pathetic, beta MC etc... Don't pay attention to those comments, I bet they haven't even read beyond chapter 20. They criticize the novel badly without reading or understanding it first. To begin with, our MC is reincarnate in the world of naruto with nothing. He has no wishes or anything like that, they dump him in the Hyuga clan where they mark him with the seal. He tells us about a more realistic Naruto world, where he makes it clear that talent is about what lineage you have. Being the MC with zero talent and no realistic chance of improving beyond Jounin the MC decides to take a chance and go another route, which, if it works for him, he will be able to improve beyond what he would have achieved through normal means. He becomes a disciple of Orochimaru to study genetics and achieve the tenseigan. Some people will say that he was Orochimaru's disciple and was still weak. But the reason is that Orochimaru didn't see any talent in him so he didn't train him, on the contrary, he was a good researcher so he made him his right hand man for scientific investigations. Many criticize that when he gets the Tenseigan, he is too weak and that the Tenseigan he has is also too weak. No, the tenseigan that the MC gets isn't weak, the MC is weak, like Nagato with the Rinnegan. The Tenseigan being the MC's own and not transplanted, the Tenseigan takes care of his MC. Without enough chakra to be a Tenseigan wielder, the Tenseigan is weakened to not killing the user. And thanks to the fact that the tenseigan awakens, the MC purifies his bloodline by improving the talent that he had, with the passage of time he can become stronger. With the birth of Naruto and the beginning of the Canon, the MC is forced to take drastic measures to increase his power enough to take on madara and kaguya. And from there is where the story improves a lot, the character development is excellent, so much so, that if you read everything in a row you will not realize that the MC has changed, but if you read how the MC behaved in the first chapters, and then you read in the last chapters, you will realize that he is more mature and more calculating. Not only our MC but also Shisui, the MC's best friend

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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Replied to Echii_Sama

    ur right, I won't drop. I'm just rewriting some parts, the uploads will be slow cause I'm a bit busy, but I'll try to finish this time OwO

    Ch 3 Capítulo 2: Preludio
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22081yr
    Replied to Duke100god

    ADMIN N°4 is a girl

    Ch 1 PROLOGO
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22082yr
    Replied to wolfzsong_h

    is toaru railgun??

    "A LOLI!!!"
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22082yr
    Replied to I_LOVE_MEGUMIN

    Emmm, nope... It'll be more like siblings or father daughter relationship.

    [For example, a normal civilian would get the physical resistance (ability to take punches) from an Uzumaki (a normal one, don't put Naruto or Kushina for comparison), a spiritual energy comparable to an EM bearer, and their senses would be enhanced at Tokubetsu Jounin level. Which is a great leap for a simple civilian]
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22082yr
    Replied to What123466

    yes, Eternal Mangekyo

    [For example, a normal civilian would get the physical resistance (ability to take punches) from an Uzumaki (a normal one, don't put Naruto or Kushina for comparison), a spiritual energy comparable to an EM bearer, and their senses would be enhanced at Tokubetsu Jounin level. Which is a great leap for a simple civilian]
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    The Ulquiorra's Jinchuriki
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  • Lelouch2208
    Lelouch22082yr
    Replied to What123466

    oh, thx

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