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With me was the opposite, I always liked Eriri and that’s why I gave this Fic a chance
Good reading to hang out, doesn't get to the point where I consider it the best, but certainly one of the best fanfics. Mc has no flat personality, it is developing little by little and we see how living in the world of Naruto makes him gain affection for his place
Excellent fanfic, the best of dragon ball I’ve read, the characters very well developed and the Giro in the plot is very good, although at first for that the desire of the MC was very good. although at first for the MC’s desire was very weak, over time shows us the potential it has And please give IT a try, the canon in the saga saiyan remains but everything improves a lot for the saga of Namek, best fanfic of Dragon ball I've read.
I knew you would come back, I really liked this FF, especially for the way you developed the harem little by little and not only added women as stupid, and although I had come to this FF looking for a harem, I really liked how you developed the MC and Eriri's relationship, to the point that I prefer that you focus more on Eriri (on perverting her a little more 7w7r) than adding more members to the harem
¿Y eso para qué sirve? Llevo en Webnovel desde hace años y aún no sé qué función tiene XD
Thx for chapter
Había requisitos para publicar una reseña???? Porque nunca los tuve? O fue recientemente? Aunque llevo leyendo aquí como 6 años....
.... MC and his Mother...... nop, if u want torture his mind, the NTR should be with all Might
Me gusto mucho tu historia, la trama aunque un poco lenta, tiene un buen ritmo, a mi parecer el autor hizo bien en llevar el ritmo de la historia de esa manera. Me gusto que la primera heroína fuera Eriri, y ojalá no la vaya a descuidar por andar con otras. También sería interesante ver una escena en la que el sexo entre Kouta y Eriri fuera más vanilla al punto de volverla totalmente adicta al MC. En cuanto a las demás heroínas, sinceramente es cuestión de gustos, aparte de Eriri, solo Sakura y Utaha me gustan, el resto era como un "Meh". Autor! Vi por ahí que iino Miko(kaguya) estaba en la lista! Agregala al Harem pls!!