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Daoist6147137mthPostedAuthor is pretty experienced with writing a good story, and generally very creative. However I just don't understand the need for the MC to be a male at first, and keep reminding the reader that he is one, even though I don't think it matter much. other than that, great story! Thank you for writing it:)
- Daoist6147131yrReplied to ChipWayman
i mean it about mental too, you are super fit but if you just find yourself in another space than you remember I would say I will be alarmed
This paragraph has been deleted. - Daoist6147131yrReplied to MoistMaster69
more like american removing them bc it too hard
[Shiro: I just want to commission a face mask that I can pull down. Black in colour.] - Daoist6147131yrCommented
or the author just forgor
It wasn't like she didn't know how to use it, it was just that her level of proficiency had to be trained in order for the skill to be on par with the rest. - Daoist6147131yrReplied to RelRel
she shouldn't have any hair after getting burnt that long
Her skin was as smooth as pearl, although slightly pale. Her hair was silky smooth and looked healthy. Her facial features were endearing and pleasing to look at. Although she was on the skinny side, the power she showed was unbefitting of her physique. She did not look like she went through the harsh trials of life. - Daoist6147131yrReplied to Bee_Kayshein_8109
- Daoist6147131yrReplied to GrunkDunce
spoken from experience most likely
On the other hand, my mother cooked and cleaned the house while taking care of me. Father usually came after work, usually playing around with me. Then again, I have to admit that he's very handsome. And mother is very pretty as well. I guess I'll become a very beautiful girl in the future… - Daoist6147131yrCommented
my man just stop being trapped in one
An ideal combat system for me would be something that I could use anywhere, even while being imprisoned in a strong Zone skill, being able to pull out of any situation, no matter the odds. - Daoist6147131yrCommented
sound like a good skill in bed if you know what i mean
Most of Nesiphae skills, according to Wagyu, consisted of controlling thousands of little snakes made of different magic elements, wrapping her enemies like threads, but inflicting status ailments on the process, some would even detonate or others would act as shields. The more she summoned these snakes, the larger would be the quantity produced, and the more enemies killed would make them stronger and sturdier. - Daoist6147132yrReplied to DragCat99
this novel is a grammar abomination
A short jog later and Kat was approaching the Orphanage grounds and noticed a light was on in the old man's office. *What's going on here? I know Gramps gets a bit worried but why is the office light on instead.* Silently making her way up the front lawn and opening the door she looked around and all was silent. The children asleep. Kat tiptoed as she made her way to the office. - Daoist6147132yrCommented
is it just me or the writing method is a bit hard to read, like it is missing a comma or something.
"Wait I never told you Kat? Some of these books don't even have anything written in them I wish they were real," Lily said holding back laughter. - Daoist6147132yrCommented
so she has some kind of device to search net, but still prefer writing on paper?
Shiro only chuckled slightly as she pulled up a chair by the side and sat down. Crossing her legs, she rested her head on her left hand whilst her spare hand searched on the net. - Daoist6147132yrReplied to MrFloofyPants
yes, sir. this comment sir, very sus
Helion dropped his hammer immediately seeing the girl in front of him. She had clear azure eyes and long flowing black hair. Her height was 5ft 3 and a modest body build. Holding the sign in front of him, she seemed almost defenceless. - Daoist6147132yrReplied to bluejags22
she is 1m6 how is she a loli
[If you don't let me do this, I will be angry.] Shiro frowned slightly. - Daoist6147132yrReplied to MoonlitBeta
isn't it the case that the device is what the scientists used to control her? and the hero save her from the control of such device?
'[Light Bearer Hero]… If only I can see you one more time.' Shiro thought as her killing intent surged outwards. - Daoist6147132yrCommented
so clothes stats account for evolution requirements ?
INT: 55 -> 60 (+50) +10 Title Bonus - Daoist6147132yrCommented
remember guys, this is China. They will hire everyone with dirt cheap salary. Jobs like factory's workers do not need much labor.
She forced herself to work so she could pay the hospital fees for her big brother.