I'm not telling the story or suspense is not good, but the way it is conveyed is vexing.. i have no problem even if you reveal that thing or Anne after 1000 chapters, but if you constantly reminds about it in every chapter then it causes irritation.. otherwise story is good keep it up 👍

there's a big big question mark on Anne's behavior and i know author will try to explain it in future but the way story is moving, i don't have much hope that it would be any way close to the satisfaction.. Also, there are so so so many repeated sentences recently and repeating plots.. the story was good for me when jack was just trying to become a rich person.. this stronghold thing is dragging the novel down, at least for me...

jack would've died surviving without getting a gf had it been not for system, so how f ucking that envelope she left was going to help him? even if she left a person to protect jack from shadow (which i am sure is not the case), that person cannot monitor him 24*7..

author is trying to create the suspense here but this is just turning ridiculous.. it's been portraid that Anne is so great, superhuman and all that but she left her child to survive in toxic family without giving a single thing, instead stole the memories

The same thing with Anne - first i assumed that jack's aunt would know about her but nothing, then came jack's father's second wife and her daughter, them came Anne's father and her family, then came elders of this Jesda family, then came Shadow organization, then came panthers organization..

let me take out my frustrations here as some things irritate me a lot.. i already f ucking know that they found this thing which cannot be revealed right now but for the gods sake you don't have to mention that in every single paragraph .. you tell the reader what it is or don't mention all the time.. and the way it has been represented until now is ridiculous .. initially it was said in the way that even the lowest person of the organization would have known this thing and what it does and now as the story goes up the ladder, not a single f ucking person knows what it is.. it wouldn't be surprising that in future this so called leader has to find someone for this item because even she f ucking doesn't know..

continuing..The same thing with Anne - first i assumed that jack's aunt would know about her but nothing, then came jack's father's second wife and her daughter, them came Anne's father and her family, then came elders of this Jesda family, then came Shadow organization, then came panthers organization..

hahahaha it's so hilarious

For the first time, I found myself skimming through the chapters in this novel 😮‍💨

The story is moving very slowly since the stronghold thing started .. i guess it's time to wait a couple or three months to stockpile chapters after this month's privilege is over..

A logical guess would be the young man who threatened vice leader and Patricia.. but again how does he and celine know each other? another magic memory eraser?

filler chapters the whole week 😤

man?

it is not nice to always finish on cliff hangers 😞😞

it seems like someone wants Azima to win this youth game and they can't force jack directly so they are blackmailing celine to handle the jack.. whatever the method they used to make celine obedient, it is dumb af if they know who jack is..

is there a hidden meaning here? "believing"? not "knowing"?

no matter how good celine is and matches jack but if she doesn't understand jack properly and decides to take drastic measures such as running away or hurt him in any way then she doesn't deserve his affection.. even though she is blackmailed, she has to trust him as he has proven enough until now and not get involved in shady things .. I'll be very very disappointed in her if she hurts jack after all he did for her..

thanks for explaining... still have some missing memories but will research on my own 😅

i have forgotten so many things.. can someone explain some of my doubts please? first, why xuefeng's wives op and immediately comprehend everything? just because they dual cultivate with him or other reasons? second, whatever talent xuefeng and his wives have due to their personal and fate abilities, is it so great that it rivals these constellations? because Pio stated earlier that even the fate king is nothing compared to them and many of them heavily rely on fate abilities.. third, that mysterious realm from where the elemental bracelet came from, is it part of / related to fate kingdom or this universe when our mc is OR it is on the same level as these constellations? forth, was Ming the Queen who ruled the fate kingdom or was she just the queen in name, meaning just the wife of the king with no authority as she didn't even know about these constellations ..

what are the chances that she is still alive?