Nic_Morin

It's all good 👍 just wanted to point it out before any "petty" haters blew up about it 😤

Don't think I've been hooked into reading a story quite so easily before lmao 🤣

The story so far has been good. Decent pacing, world building, character development etc. One thing that I have noticed with some minor concern is that there seems to be a few chapters that appear to belong to a different story altogether. Now this is probably just an accidental upload ( I'm hoping) or an attempt at a story line focused on a different character that wasn't done very well. Regardless I hope to continue reading this story that the author has created for us to enjoy.

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

Dear great author, please don't let this die. This is the only fan fic that I was not only NOT disappointed in But was begging for MORE of. So please come back with more of this great story!!!

This story is amazing. It takes the #system and #non-human genre in a great direction! No murder hobo and no system slave!!! I am begging for more!!!!