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Shuayeb_Ahmed2hCommentedwhat a waste he could've just said use the rest of my points to boost my potential please
"Yes, I am done with my purchase, could you reincarnate me now?" He said, with Ichimonji, he just hopes that he gets into a decent enough world that he can survive in long enough and also not be an old man.- Shuayeb_Ahmed3hCommentedTo me, Uchiha Funan, I would like to call you: Blamekage!
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shiki didn't have conquerors haki right?
Suddenly, a dark golden wave erupted from Shiki, his Haoshoku Haki was released without restraint, at the same time, a furious scream echoed throughout the Eternal Hell. - Shuayeb_Ahmed12hCommented
then he doesn't need a devil fruit right? for him it'd just be another ability
Damien had naturally taken baths in the sea before, he never felt any weakness, and yet he was born with certain unnatural powers. - Shuayeb_Ahmed12hReplied to Marshall_
imagine getting the pig pig fruit and becoming a pig...
And there are MANY trash fruits… - Shuayeb_Ahmed19hReplied to Reus_255
how is stealing their chi worse than killing them?
[IMPORTANT IMAGE OF WHITE TIGER] - Shuayeb_Ahmed22hCommented
half an hour???? a bit exaggerated no? imagine staring at a boy doing nothing for half an hour
This Sorting took longer than the previous ones, and everyone wondered what conversation had transpired between Harry and the Sorting Hat. All they knew was that it took quite a while—perhaps half an hour—before the Sorting Hat finally spoke. - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
since basically everyone who matters knows that the hokage is suppressing mizuki why should he bother pretending to be concerned for his safety?
Mizuki pretended to be relieved and said, "That's good! Just be fine, Mr. Hokage!" - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dReplied to Salman_
even in India it'd be strange if you're not offered tea
Not to mention it's a hot day; you're serving me a steaming drink.detailI Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!Urban · Chen Tang Resting on the Moon - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dReplied to Kaoski
peace... sending a message that there is someone strong enough to erase a village to the other villages.
"If I had the choice, I would have chosen to kill you, but your worthless 2 lives might become the reason for the death of 10,000 lives which I don't want to see." - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dCommented
if he could wreck a and b together that easily he could probably erase kumo after getting rid of them... why didn't he?
"If I had the choice, I would have chosen to kill you, but your worthless 2 lives might become the reason for the death of 10,000 lives which I don't want to see." - Shuayeb_Ahmed1dReplied to Malphegor
i think you might as well just make it a village similar to iwa. after all that will give you more freedom to create your own OC's and your own legends within the village. you can also adjust the culture here and there to fit better
Before heading to the academy, he stopped by a bustling market stall, drawn in by the irresistible aroma of freshly baked treats. His eyes widened as he scanned the display of culinary creations. - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dCommented
sometimes greatness can be found in simplicity. instead of saying 'culinary creations' you could say 'food on display'. after all in that sentence you're expounding on the thoughts of your MC and i don't know about you but when I've seen a food stall the thought, culinary creations have never come to mind. when writing from your MC's point of view, you should think carefully on what kind of words he might say in his mind considering his age, background and personality. this is just my own humble opinion though. in the end you should stick with whatever you feel is right.
Before heading to the academy, he stopped by a bustling market stall, drawn in by the irresistible aroma of freshly baked treats. His eyes widened as he scanned the display of culinary creations. - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dCommented
he doesn't need this deal. this is him helping them. they can't force him to do anything. why should he commit to this? especially when it may anger mihawk.
"You're being a little unreasonable," He remarked, having no choice but to accept this deal which was not a problem in itself, the problem was how to break this up with his mother without getting beheaded in the process. - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dCommented
id still be leery about her though.... maybe it's just me
"From the bottom of my heart, I thank you for saving my daughters and opening my eyes…" - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dCommented
conquers haki effected the weather in the anime therefore theoretically it should be able to affect matter.
It wasn't exactly gravity, but the principle worked the same way as gravity did. Conqueror Haki on its own was unable to affect matter, but his Fourth Haki was different. He called it Psychokinesis, but that was too hard of a word for the citizen of this world to comprehend, hence, he left it as just '4th Will'. - Shuayeb_Ahmed2dReplied to TAKION'W-Why is she a female!? Could it be… the theory of parallel worlds? Not everything is bound to be exact. But it is a universe close enough to resemble one piece. There are different things and one of them is Mihawk's gender? if that's the case, how many things are different? is Shanks a woman too? Luffy? is this a matriarchal world?!'
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sakamoto kun dedu ga?
Tsubakihara Yuuji - Shuayeb_Ahmed3dCommented
how is sasuke as strong as Naruto with Naruto's insane training regimen? sasuke shouldn't be able to match Naruto's training regimen without Naruto's healing factor
Shaking his head as he stands up rubbing his stomach painfully, Naruto wiped the sweat from his forehead with his t-shirt and stared at Sasuke for a moment "I think it's time to move on to a new level of physical training."