SAByeol
Filmmaker and photographer
of reading
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Love the story, keeps me on the edge of my seat a lot. But I’m not rocking the new art style, too much of a dramatic change. It was less noticeable after the first 50+ chapters, as it could have been a development of art styke by the artist team. The new one just makes it seem like a different story all together. I just can not mentally stich it as the same story rn.
There should be a translation rating. So for Fairness of the “writing” i gave it a 1 star. As the current rating doesnt represent the novel as a whole. Poor translation, difficult to follow, grammatically incorrect, wrong use of Terminology from Ancient asian ranks, and the use of English profanity to substitute asian profanity. And the profanity isnt even used correctly, no one calls a female “You son of a B***” That is for refering to males. They should do us all a favour and collaborate with a native english speaker to correct these horrible errors. Over all i found this super annoying to read due to these errors.