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Kyle_Brant2yrReplied to FrozenBlazeI’ve read to over chapter 1000 and let me tell you the plot armor is thicker than you realize.
A bottle of C-rank Nutrient Fluid cost 400 Credits.- Kyle_Brant2yrReplied to FrozenBlaze
Having a scheme to push people to buy credits isn’t a solid business practice. plus if he has a scam in which this would work you would still want fall back incase your scam didn’t work. The only thing this character has is plot armor as thick as a gundam’s armor plating.
A bottle of C-rank Nutrient Fluid cost 400 Credits. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Daoistf0ibA8
Then a little clarity would be helpful, but to go from “everything died withIn 20 yards” then three paragraphs later claim “15 yards extended to 45 yards” then another 6 later just go “the 100 yard radius” could all be fixed with consistancy or adding “the dragons roar killed everything within a 100 yard radius”
At this moment, however, the source of the pillar of light was a disaster. Every plant and monster within a radius of 100 yards had been turned into ash. Currently, only one man and one sword resided in the center of this desolate area. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Aurafyre
I normally can as long as it's chapters apart or even a chapter apart, but not when it's one page back. it means the author didn't proofread
Compared to the previous black magic array, a twofold magic array now appeared beneath Shi Feng's feet. The array's radius had also expanded from the previous 15 yards to 45 yards. In the next moment, a massive pillar of black light appeared in the middle of the canyon. Even those standing at the canyon's entrance could see the pillar of light clearly, much less the players within the map. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Aurafyre
The beginning of the previous page; it states it extended from 20 yards, this one states it extended from 15 yards to 45 yards
Compared to the previous black magic array, a twofold magic array now appeared beneath Shi Feng's feet. The array's radius had also expanded from the previous 15 yards to 45 yards. In the next moment, a massive pillar of black light appeared in the middle of the canyon. Even those standing at the canyon's entrance could see the pillar of light clearly, much less the players within the map. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Aurafyre
Suspension of disbelief is like a rubber band. You can stretch it to a certain point, but when you try stretching it too far, it breaks. Just because you suspend disbelief doesn’t mean you believe everything.
However, with the increase in brain activity and, simultaneously, brain usage rates, humans could actively control these processes instead of leaving the brain to passively control them. If brain activity increased to a sufficient level, humans could even control their own body’s hormone production, fine-tuning their own bodies to increase their own lifespans, maintain a youthful appearance, and so on. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Aurafyre
So tell me what happens when suspension of disbeleif is broken? It’s essentially story-breaking. People read stories to escape reality; with that in mind, people also want stories that exaggerate their own world’s reality. So if you push your realm of storytelling beyond what is beyond reasonable, even when your disbelief is suspended means you've broken your story.
However, with the increase in brain activity and, simultaneously, brain usage rates, humans could actively control these processes instead of leaving the brain to passively control them. If brain activity increased to a sufficient level, humans could even control their own body’s hormone production, fine-tuning their own bodies to increase their own lifespans, maintain a youthful appearance, and so on. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Joseph_7925
Congratulations.... you have achived nothing. Thats what suspension of disbelife means. In stories there are levels in which you suspend your thoughts a good story only does this minimally, this whole story took everything belivable and has ground it to dust. There isn’t even a semblance of belivability even in his fictional world. Even his own lore is being written over characters change classes from chapter to chapter, his rarity system is broken because everything is rare until the SF grabs it then it becomes common place, his villianous characters have no personality other that “im more rich than you so therefore im more powerful”.
However, with the increase in brain activity and, simultaneously, brain usage rates, humans could actively control these processes instead of leaving the brain to passively control them. If brain activity increased to a sufficient level, humans could even control their own body’s hormone production, fine-tuning their own bodies to increase their own lifespans, maintain a youthful appearance, and so on. - Kyle_Brant3yrReplied to Zayci_Suca
Its the only way it makes the story work, most reincarnation stoeies start After the death of the main guy. so why cant it just be his death dream, the time dialation doesnt work otherwise.
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