Emerson_Leite

Unfortunately, after 5 chapters and reading only what was written in the previous chapter. The fic seems more like an eternal status than a story, which, I must say, progresses extremely little with each chapter. Try using the status less every half dozen stories and maybe you can write something interesting. I will give it another chance in the future, if it continues. Good luck author.

Movie name: 3 Men and a Baby.

I'll be as honest as possible here. Some chapters are messy, sometimes the same event happens twice, or happens and then happens again with a new follow-up. The time jump from chapter 13 or 14? to 16 was a bit aggressive, but it gives an interesting glimpse of what will happen in the future. The only reason this isn't rated higher is because: 1st - there are only 15 chapters, since 2 are author's notes. 2nd - the confusion in some chapters already mentioned above. It could be an excellent read, one that is truly worth it, but it needs a little more polish, attention and chapters. I hope to be able to redo this review in the near future with a resounding 5 as a score. See you soon, author, and take care.

If he is a time traveler, he came from the future of the same world correct? Or is he reincarnated? Honestly confused on this one.

Which guys?

It's a good story, but the formatting is quite confusing. There are huge chunks of conversations mixed between characters that sometimes make it confusing who is talking to whom. Author, try to separate the conversations better, your story is good. Good luck.

Meu amigo, sua história está boa, engraçado nos éguas ao invés de água que encontrei. (risos) Continue a escrever, e espero mais capítulos. Que minha nota 4 possa se tornar um 5 em breve. Poucos capítulos, bem escritos e estruturados até aqui, fique com Deus e boa escrita, meu amigo.

guerreiro das éguas? Vai virar um cafetão? kkkkkkkkkkkk

Apparently, the MC doesn't know Naruto, but he's a hardcore One Piece fan. That's okay, but not knowing and not having a shred of information is completely insane. Worse still, it's frustrating how the conversation unfolds and they seem to understand each other even though they don't really understand each other. Not mentioning the Marines or who the Shichibukai are or Whitebeard is very strange for a guy who's a One Piece fan.

It could be a much better rating, but strange names appear out of nowhere, causing unnecessary confusion. I was expecting a good read, with an interesting background of the MC, but like I said, who is Akai? or Qeny? (I don't remember correctly), Tang country?. Fix that and maybe it will be a good fanfic to read.