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Can you imagine that when the protagonist summons ibaraki douji, he connects to the ley lines and becomes voluptuous by the logic of dxd?

Can you give me the title of the Chinese novel please?

What is the name of the novel in its original language?

You can also write a third person scene where Luke is thinking about what the turtle master has told him in a moment where he almost falls to the dark side remembers what the turtle told him And thus avoid falling into the dark side, even becoming stronger by resisting its temptation.Even Master Yoda can visit the restaurant and share wisdom with the turtle.

Yes, that is precisely it

Friend, sorry to tell you this, but you should not underestimate the customers of the store because many of them are martial arts masters, they can read Naruto's aura and feel the negative power From Naruto. Don't neglect his reactions or his detection skills.

Friend, I'm giving you this review for your own good. Check out a novel I'm reading that's about the Grandson of the Second Wizard of Type Moon. There you'll find more inspiration for your story. The author's name is astoryforone.

Although it would be nice if you added some third person thoughts from the girls from time to time to spice up the chapter.

Original name please

I almost fell out of my chair when I read the part where Hagrid would go to the ball with the great mother .dimitrescu