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I wanna massage you with both of my handsFeel you up like I've been your manWant you to touch the tip of my glansI wanna be in your bum, yeahIf you don't leave imma comeWant you to suck on my boneYeah, they say it's harder than stonePlease don't make my tip feel aloneSandwich me between your thighs like an OreoDo it evеry night like its a choreoI'm finna sing you to sleep n' call it sterеoGirl, stuff my ass like it's a glory hole, ughWoah
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ShutTheFuckUp_5mthReplied to kingchad420Huh? Nah its right. Dunno where you saw him eating it recently,.
"Everyone, there's a black dragon standing behind Doflamingo. If we want to disrupt this auction, we must confront the black dragon," Xilan declared solemnly. "This individual has been in conflict with our Marine for decades, and this time, we must do everything in our power to eliminate him. Our top-tier combat forces will be dispatched immediately to utterly defeat him."- ShutTheFuckUp_5mthReplied to Emmanuel_CapricornCh 55 [55] The Secret Truth
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to Azrael_DAngel
I find you here and truly understand how stupid you are.
"Why are you letting them go?" I turned to Bishamon, disappointed at the weak guts of the real-life boldness of a character I liked. "If it's you and me, we can defeat them." - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to PumaxzCh 40 Chapter 40
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to GrenhaerCh 37 Chapter 37
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to laboonlaboon
Shallow comedy instance.
Ghost Spider was taken aback and promptly retorted, "I bought a watch there last year!" - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to GrenhaerCh 36 Chapter 36
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to Onxio
True, but clearly worth less than being an Admiral and having more information's than most people.
but the thought of retiring and potentially becoming poor again was a daunting prospect. - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to AspiringPedo
Pretty much, it was Xilang in the raws tho, better without the "g" anyway
"Greetings, Admiral Xilan." Xilan's arrival was greeted with standing from the senior executives present, including Marine Admirals like Kizaru and Aokiji. - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to AspiringPedo
Cough Cough, details
This man was none other than Kaido, captain of the Beasts Pirates also known as "the strongest creature in the sea, land, and air." - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to Garland
Alright thanks for the feedback I guess? Anyway let me address the main points of your review, 1st of all, it is a Chinese fanfiction...2nd, the betrayal isn't even a betrayal, from what I noticed it has been said from the very beginning that the MC of this Chinese fanfiction's base has always been kinda corrupted, and the plot-driving thingy of this novel is exactly profits, the main character hasn't trained even once in his life, he used the money he gathered with this kind of lifestyle to reach the status of an admiral (money burning system), and exactly for that reason, knowing full well he is going to retire soon, he chooses to just get the most out of it while he still could... So yeah, he was never "loyal" in the first place, in the One Piece world you either are a pirate or you are under the Marines and the world government (let's forget about bounty hunters for now), being a Marine gives you more chances and information with how to plan your course of actions. That's why he's even a Marine. Damn I talk a lot.3rd, what do you even mean with "everything" at least define it a little bit, because from my point of view everything followed exactly a believable course, the Marines know there is someone high enough that is causing problems, but the pirates won't wait for the internal strifles to be settled, they will take advantage of that, and just like Doflamingo had a Vice Admiral inside the Marine organization, others will probably have the same.Anyway, talked too much, thanks for the honest albeit probably biased against Chinese fanfictions opinion. I hope you find a good read.
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to KontoelBiru
- ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to WebReaderPub
Because the deal was made between them (Xilan and WB) and suddenly Ace gets freed, Whitebeard will say to Ace something along the lines of "Perhaps they know each other" when Ace tells him it wasn't Xilan that saved him.
Within the ranks of Marine, high-ranking officials couldn't help but wear gloomy expressions, particularly Akainu, whose visage turned even more ferocious. However, one person stood out from the rest—the beaming smile of Vice Admiral Garp, who saw Xilan's actions as a glimmer of hope in a seemingly hopeless world. - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to WebReaderPub
He could've I guess, maybe another time who knows.
"Straw Hat Luffy, the grandson of Marine hero Garp, the son of the revolutionary Monkey D. Dragon, and the best friend of the legendary Red-Haired Shanks!" - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to WebReaderPub
Welp, let's say its for his image, imagine a Marine Admiral going to the Naval Headquarters without a ship, plus we can take into account that maybe he is bringing some of the Marines in his base with him, although it won't be said in the next chapters.
Xilan cursed under his breath. He had a feeling that something was amiss at Naval Headquarters, and now he was left with no means of transportation. All he had were a few makeshift oars to rely on. - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to WebReaderPub
Cough, I mean no oppai power and no Dragon inside him but ye.. That one, but he also uses moves from Fairy Tail like the roar.
At the helm of this base is the esteemed Admiral Xilan, also known by his epithet, the "Red Dragon". He's the user of the Mythical Zoan type Devil Fruit, the Red Dragon Emperor, which is considered a god-tier Devil Fruit, imbued with potential on par with Straw Hat Luffy's Nika fruit. - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to BurgerNight
I mean I just left it. It ain't wrong I guess? They are friends and Luffy always thinks about that promise he made to him. Dunno about Shanks, prolly the same tho.
"Straw Hat Luffy, the grandson of Marine hero Garp, the son of the revolutionary Monkey D. Dragon, and the best friend of the legendary Red-Haired Shanks!" - ShutTheFuckUp_6mthReplied to BurgerNight
Nop.
Within the ranks of Marine, high-ranking officials couldn't help but wear gloomy expressions, particularly Akainu, whose visage turned even more ferocious. However, one person stood out from the rest—the beaming smile of Vice Admiral Garp, who saw Xilan's actions as a glimmer of hope in a seemingly hopeless world.