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Ethereal0621dCommentedThatâs a good starting strength
Hi guys, welcome to my sixth and final chapter (jk you thought) so we are FINALLY getting Beerus into hero work. Sorry it took me so long to finish this up also if you haven't already, I posted a chapter for a new story so feel free to check it out. Also, I know that I haven't been clear about Beerus's strength but I think it's safe to assume that he is around Nolan's or surpassing his strength. Based on the fact that he is like Allen the Alien and was raised in the harsh conditions of Viltrum. Thoughts on this? Anyways, let me know what you think. Leave some reviews (pretty please) and enjoy the chapter.- Ethereal0621dCommented
Please make Amber the one from the comics along with the other designs of the characters
"What's up, fuck face? Amber isn't here to protect you now," Todd taunted, gesturing towards Mark. "And who's this muscle head that's with you?" - Ethereal0621dCommented
Conquest and bloodshed. Going to earth and becoming soft is used in almost every story like this and itâs boring and we already saw that in the show and comics. He should stay loyal to the empire. And have alot of kids and raise them as viltrumites. To many authors avoid that in storys. Please never focus on romance and make the main wife a viltrumite like Anissa
Hey guys, welcome back to the 4th chapter of my story. If anyone has suggestions for the direction the story will go then feel free to dm or leave a review for me to read since I am not totally sure where I want the story to go towards, Mark or the Empire. I'll try to make the chapters longer and longer, but I am new to writing so bear with me. With that said, enjoy. - Ethereal0621dCommented
Exhaustion? Viltrumites can fight for days without rest. Why is his stamina so low?
Beerus stood amidst the wreckage of the training arena, his chest heaving as he struggled to catch his breath. Every muscle in his body screamed in protest from the intense battle he had just endured. Through the haze of exhaustion, he glimpsed a figure approaching from the far end of the arena. It was Conquest, a formidable presence whose very name struck fear into the hearts of enemies across the Empire. - Ethereal0624dCommented
Bats are better for maneuverability
Unless I chose to ignore all reason and increase the size of a small bird's wings until they were large enough to carry a half-ton wolfman, there was simply no way that I could stably graft the required genetics for flight onto my own. - Ethereal06211dCommented
Yes since the soul dosent have a gender it shouldnât be a determining factor
3. Do you think it's possible for otherworldly demons to be born as the other gender in the new world? - Ethereal06213dCommented
I never understood this in ffs. u have characters willing to commit mass genocide, but somehow draw the line at coercing women? Weird
With Issei's words said, both Devils fell silent while Ddraig listened to their conversation feeling Issei wasn't worthy of being her host, she knew each of Issei's inner thoughts and found them disgusting, she didn't mind killing, plundering, and the like but forcing oneself onto someone wasn't something she condoned, it was an odd limit for a Dragon but nonetheless she didn't like the thoughts Issei had. - Ethereal06213dCommented
You know the Bible says not to use vain repetition
"Lord Jesus Christ, Son of God, have mercâ" Amidst his prayer, he hears heavy footsteps and noises coming towards his cell quickly, and soon a guard opens the cell door without caring to interrupt the old man in the middle of his prayer, illuminating the once almost entirely dark solitary cell in which the old man was imprisoned. - Ethereal06218dCommented
Righteous then demonic
3. If you were to reincarnate, would you be a demonic or righteous path cultivator? - Ethereal06218dCommented
Southern border
1. If you had to live in the Gu World, but you could choose the continent, which would you choose? Why? - Ethereal06223dCommented
Buy some pure gold then copy that
- Author's question : What would you do if you got the Akshaya Patra in RL? - Ethereal06226dCommented
Itâs weird how maintaining his TRUE form takes effort. If itâs his true form shouldnât it be the easiest to use?
But our reprieve was short-lived. The effects of the battle and the strain of maintaining my true form were overwhelming. Sensing the familiar pull of the underworld, my only safe haven, I channeled the last vestiges of my strength. The world swirled once more, and then we were there, in the cold, familiar embrace of my domain. My vision swam, and I collapsed onto the hard stone floor, darkness claiming me. - Ethereal06227dCommented
+1
2) Just let him have knowledge of other mythologies - Ethereal06230dCommented
Thanks for the chap and please donât give mc a human form
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Those wings are way to small each one should at least be 3 times the bodyâs length
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Yes
To do that, I would need plenty of powerful females. There were some feline characters who would be worthy and capable of bearing my cubs in Kung Fu Panda and Tigress was one of them. - Ethereal0621mthPosted
- Ethereal0621mthCommentedCh 28 Ch 27 Sinful Sinful, A Godly Issue
- Ethereal0621mthCommentedCh 2 Blood feud