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is luffy going to be immune to dark matter from now on?

i dont care about that. the only thing that that put me off about this story is that right now more than half of the story is dedicated to odin or thor bashing. and him and his daddy issues. all stories with this similar plot do this and is gotten mehhh.well thats all bye

anko yandere mode?

now this does put a smile on my face

form me this is a drop. i like the whole aspect of a more "dark world" but i think this was to much for what you were trying to convey. at least for me. yeah i get you want a very tragic back story and all, but it was just to much in my opinion. her sleeping with other people before marriage was okey i get it. and even the mistreating of her in her marriage by her husband it was acceptable, ok in a sence. but all the rest is was just too much i repeat at least for me. any way this a good by. . one way to fix this is to not maker part of the harem, and only a really tragic side character back story. i will not drop if this is the case. . another way you can correct this is by retuning her youth before anything happen. or a time reversing spell in her body. but even then i think this chapter will stick with the readers for ever. i could even accept if this was the case for bella, her sister, only considering she is really crazy and loyal to the dark lord. but both of them i think i pass thank you . despite all that i think this story is well writing story and has a nice plot going that has potential.

gwen x mc x natasha. no harem just those two

this is a good fanfic hope you stick to it. i hope you stay with gwen stacy. she is a rally good girl. smart. and she to has a thing for heroism. make her spiderwoman or make here create her own spider or super serum, she is smart af

This story is gold!!!

temari