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I have read your book. The plot of your story is good. But there are more thing you need to know and work on your story to make it much better so that you can get contract.1. Synopsis: should summarize your story but it should be mysterious so that reader would be curious to read your book. 2. Grammatical mistake and dialogues improvement.Other than that your story plot is good if you correct these things you might get contract.
1. First of all there isn't a proper cover. You haven't even wrote synopsis which means it doesn't gave any idea about your book.2. There are no inverted coma around the dialogues. No proper paragraph. Not even any explanation of the dialogue who is saying and what he/she was doing when saying those dialogues.3. The starting wasn't understandable. And also the chapter words count should be at 1000 to 1500 words.4. There is not even a proper background.
Really sorry for inconvenience. There is a mistake in chp 45, 46 and 47 I think. Both are connected because of repeating scene. At that time it wasn't removing nor deleting. So I told in the author note that their is a mistake in those chapter. And ending repeating in the next chapter was my mistake that I thought it would be easier for the reader if that person has skipped pervious chp so he/she will get a review what happened in the previous chp that's why I repeated ending in the next following chp. I stopped doing that I think from 55 or 56 I don't remember the exact one. To sum up all these, new chp doesn't have these repeating ending so you can read without getting bothered from repeating endings. Really sorry for those mistakes. I hope you would be enjoying the book!!Thanks for giving a chance to my book!!Have a nice day!