Zimokita
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Zimokita4 years agoPostedThe story is good just remeber to put punctuation marks inside the quotations like "The wondering man went to the store!" or "The wandering man went to the store?". They give emotion to what your character is saying, but yea that was the only flaw I saw.
- Zimokita4 years agoReplied to Andry_Reyes
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