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Atreyu_Parks

Atreyu_Parks

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2019-09-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks1yr
    Posted

    locked the first chapter no point in reading.

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    Smart Cultivation System: I Just Want To Keep Low-profile
    Eastern · Explosive Latte
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks2yr
    Posted

    I liked this story but It has a lot of issues the translation or writing quality aren't great and there are a lot of story inconsistencies and just lack of explanation for most everything and you can't even infer most of the information because it seems to be following dnd races/abilities but completely butchered without explanation like how the mc is a red dragon that has its flavour replaced with a blue dragon at the same time it uses some sort of OP power that is barely explained and made useless unless the mc is about to die leaving absolutely no suspense. characters are 1 dimensional and flat with no real character development which can be fine but I have an issue with the fact that the author seems to introduce a new side character that we know is going to die in the next 10 chapters and wastes time fleshing them out as well as breaking the flow of the story. the other side characters seem like they will be important at some point but aren't fleshed out enough to make us care about them or understand why they will be important later other than they hold a position and dont like dragons. over all this story seems like an extremely rough draft and I would like to see it be refined.

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    Reincarnated as a Red Dragon, Discipline Makes Me Stronger!
    Urban · Seventh Face of Magic
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks2yr
    Commented

    this chapter made me drop this story it just goes against what has already been established character traits and just feels out of place and illogical for both Aaron and ellena creating an inconsistency that ruined my experience of this story I was really enjoying until amber showed up it would have made so much more sense to drive her out of the story or at least out of the annoying position she is in she instantly establishes herself as a threat by her ability to detect lies Aaron wouldn't be dumb enough to keep her around if he actually wants to keep ellena safe I'm done with my rant do with it what you will

    Ch 25 Decision
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    I Became a System
    Fantasy · yohananmikhael
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks2yr
    Replied to Piggy

    like most translations that is probably just the closest translation for a word we don't have in English

    Angels were divided into ten levels, namely little angels, ordinary angels, archangels, principality angels, virtue angels, power angels, dominion angels, throne angels, cherubim, and seraphim.
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    After Transmigrating as a Demon, I've Been Adopted by Angels!
    Fantasy · Tangerines and Watermelons
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks2yr
    Commented

    people and their hate on Maleficent

    Ji-ah thought about how those were not the words she'd describe the Evil Queen. "Well, stay healthy, I guess."
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    Fallen Lightbringers' Return
    Fantasy · Hyowha
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Commented

    it actually makes a lot of sense as kahjit are basically cats keeping a cat as a pet might seem more like slavery to them

    "Shame! Jo'noud prefers dogs."
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    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Replied to _Felix_

    I'm pretty sure that is a artistic rendition of the MC of Overlord

    Why is it Leaking?
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    Dragonborn Saga
    Video Games · El_Don
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Replied to Atreyu_Parks

    and probably has something to do with the rank of the skill like the guardians tempering technique was estimated to be legendary so it can provide bigger benefits at lower levels

    [Intuition has reached the capped limit, Unable to level up any further]
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Replied to Son_Sea

    pretty sure you have to upgrade the skill to a higher level like the cap of pro level is E+ but cap of the next rank would be D+ or something along those lines

    [Intuition has reached the capped limit, Unable to level up any further]
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Replied to Solomons_Gate

    not really bullet proof vests are made to disperse the force of a projectile going fast and are usually made of sheets of kevlar which is more like a durable fabric than anything else so it will disperse the force of the bullet across the whole vest but when faced with a sharp object like a knife it will just cut through it like fabric just harder because it has many layers

    [Defense: 1, Able to guard against regular gun bullets; 2, Weak protection against sharp weapons.]
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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  • Atreyu_Parks
    Atreyu_Parks3yr
    Replied to Hashbrown2

    He wants to live but he doesn't see any other option besides risking his life in this game to make money for the chance to live a full life rather than just "waste" his life waiting to die

    He had so much hope, so many dreams for his life… He did not want to die.
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    The Devil's Cage
    Games · Rusty Dragon
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