Kaleb_Dunn
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I think you did an excellent job on these past 4 chapters! I deeply appreciate how you not only had realistic and detailed physical elements but also fully outlined the emotional aspect as well. Micheal and Marina's relationship has been a joy to read about up to this point and will continue to be in the future. I think it would benefit the story if content similar to this was included among future events but caution against its overuse as it could very easily derail the plot that you have artfully crafted. I would like to express my gratitude for being able to read your story and my appreciation of the time and effort you have put in to it's creation
imagine if the enforcers started applying that rule to people outside the colonyš¤£ got enemy soldiers disappearing because they're not sleeping enough
I would just like to take a moment to thank the author for their amazing writing abilities. throughout the last few chapters you have perfectly displayed the emotions that would be their in a real situation like that. reading this mini arc has been tremendous and painful. thank you