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yellow_puffa day agoReplied to Little_North_Starwell.....if u wanna develop i probably think you need an editor , just the flow of your story telling has many holes.... i mean you probably know what alll this is about but we readers cant get into your head
- yellow_puff7 days agoPosted
okey ...like this is very bad... it feels like every third paragraph is missing with some information the story is developing very fast, again smt to do with the missing info
- yellow_puff7 days agoCommented
????????????? the what now
- yellow_puff7 days agoCommented
....what's with this time rushing every paragraph.... its the first day...and you know if you gonn a pay with a card, just order online
- yellow_puff7 days agoCommented
...to keep who feed???? who is them......
- yellow_puff7 days agoReplied to Little_North_Star
it said after her fourth time....people wouldnt whisper if they just saw her for the first time anyway there are a few skipping information i guess
- yellow_puff10 days agoCommented
where can i get one of these expiriences
- yellow_puff17 days agoCommented
hahaahhahah xddd
- yellow_puff21 days agoPosted
this is Mpreg i hope you add the tag if i knew this I wouldn't bother to read it i just don't like this stuff
- yellow_puff21 days agoReplied to punzygracy
Can I ask is this mpreg?
