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keep going and have fun....ehm i hope i wasnt harsh ...i mean i have no right to say much i cant write to save my life
so smt like the body is not used to the new soul ....even more reason to stay put and rest sssss i am just too different in thinking
oh ...well i cant imagine it but that's your mc and you take on it i am just sad because i got the wrong picture in the first chap All the best xo
okey i am sad that this will turn into a HAREM :((( saw it in the tags in mtl version
what a freaking profound way to seek death .......
i was excited about the tags but well mc has a very questionable character design it is a bit inconsistent The story is not that bad a bit average probably not an experienced writer but keep going ;) It is a bit fast pieced so it comes out as some things are missing
but why do this then aaaa this is very confusing, should his first instictive reaction be to get himself in top shape ...or am i missing something
but....this is soooo extra for what reason did he even help? i mean he comes from a much worse place so you would think he would just ignore all this unnecessary drama
bro she litelary said this is her like 100 life....really how can u even think DIFERENTLY
Yes this sentence actually makes the most sense