Mc must have at least some money sense if he is going to be a merchant ..but the story idea is pretty good 👍👍

It actually pretty good please update

I don't think you can just go around saying "Hey I from another world and you are all frictional character" unless you want to get thrown in prison and interrogated

I think you need to work on the character I mean you suddenly get transferred to a unknown location and immidiately head to the biggest tent to speak to the person in it,it doesn't make any sense.A more realistic one would be asking a random person or soilder about where you are