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Richie520

Richie520

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2019-09-15 JoinedGlobal
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    Here's my initial review: 1. The story is indeed a slow burn 2. The summary is very intriguing 3. Explanation and world building is to top point 4. The writing seemed realistic 5. Writing flow seemed consistent and easy to understand 6. Plot development is also good 7. Character design is well done Overall, It's a highly recommended book

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    The Devil's Entice
    Fantasy · Joshan_Jo
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    the chapter seemed short for me!!! But it's ok.

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    ????

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    is heroine a dimwit!!! I mean it took her so long to get she got transmigrated

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    understandable

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    wow!!! the words have life in them

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    yeah...a forest is no less than a maze

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
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    trust ur instincts

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    omg!! the title!!! is it a bait??

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    This is well explained.

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    so me.

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Posted

    The story's pace is slow, but enjoyable. The starting chapters are especially good with all the descriptions and the emotions were conveyed nicely. Would surely recommend this.

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    Fantasy · trumpet_creeper01
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    Description is top notch

    Dressed in all silver with blue highlights long dress which is glistening under the moon light and dazzling hotel lights, she looked no less than any princess and is breathtakingly beautiful. Anyone who looked at her once couldn't avert their gaze away from her. Soon, she became the attention of everyone.
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    Stay strong, young lad.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1. A pawn among many
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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    Poor guy

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  • Richie520
    Richie5201yr
    Commented

    He is hiding there, right?

    " He must be hiding near the yachts. Check the area!" The second-in-hand commanded again. As his orders echoed the harbour, soon his men began the search mission, while few flew to the highest tower of the dock, torching the whole area.
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