Kamil_Delekt

this is a copy of a old translated work for a few yours back autor didnt change hte chinis names .......................................................

it wos a wary nice story till chapter 50~~ after that is just AI slop ................... .............. .......................... ................. .

O.o what what chapter 3 is like 5x time copy o the chapter?

Is really good ... is rare for fanfic to go in details in to sayan "culture" if we can coll that ... hope Author continues fast updated ...............

i think this chapter is wrong ... i mean is 43/44 not 53/54

good chapter finaly show us what the girls can really do or add last parts....

AI .............................................................................................................................................................................................................

AI generated .... is sad.... asd asd asd asd asd asd asd asd asd asdasd......................................................................................................................................................................................

chinis names in japans setting ???? that just brake any immersion .........................................................................................