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Why is the mc not taking any action to oppose or prepare for opposing Hidenburg. He knows that Hidenburg will always oppose him so he must take some actions.
So is the translator broken cause last chapter and this one has some mix-ups.
The internal monologues are simply blocks of text and pacing is off. I mean we are reading blocks of text which accomplishes nothing in the story (reads like ai). Otherwise good story.
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He can copy skills from watching videos right. So why isn't he doing that.
what was this chapter ????
Maybe you can proofread chapters with help of AI. There are many grammatical mistakes.
The mc seems pretty weak for having powers of Thor. Bullets shouldn't do anything to him and only Homelander may be able to hurt him.
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