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  • 2yr
    Replied to ThumpyMaximus

    Ahahaha, now that would a hilarious plotwist. All I'm sure of is that it is someone that we already know of.

    Ch 1438 Family Time (Part 2)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 2yr
    Commented

    Does anybody know when to expect a new chapter?

    Ch 496 Locking On Spacetime
    altalt
    Tales of Demons and Gods
    Eastern · Mad Snail
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  • 3yr
    Posted

    A few grammatical and semantic comments about the Synopsis. My aim is to inform and not to criticize. "The time will come for the past of the future to converge." It is said that "multiple" things converge. But here, there is a single element: 'the past of the future'. Depending on the meaning, 'the past and the future to converge' would be more appropriate. "And those which you always deny". This doesn't sound right. "those" is used as a pronoun here, but it needs an antecedent, that does not appear here, thus it makes no sense. You usually deny something, not a person. "The people whose existence you deny, shall surely emerge", would be better. "Wheel of the world will be put to rest". I know it is a metaphor but it doesn't sound right. 'The wheel of the World will stop spinning.' Would sound more natural. "Sapiens deserve no more of the mother earth". I suppose you mean 'to no greater extent'. In this case, you need to say "no more [than] sth/sby" Here would be a few correct alternatives: "Sapiens no longer deserve anything our Mother Earth has to offer" "Sapiens no longer deserve our Mother Earth" "Sapiens do not deserve our mother Earth any more" Note that Mother Earth is capitalized. "For what good of a faith that has been spitted to dirt." > 'What good of' is not a correct collocation. > One can say 'What good is', 'What good does', 'What good would'... So I propose: "What good is there in a faith that has been spitted on?" As for the last two lines of the Speech, this is just a personal opinion but I think it is unclear whether the 'not' denies that 'He' heard the 'cries' (the intended meaning), or whether 'every corner of the sky' do not hear 'Him': So I propose: "But He who had severed the ties Heard nothing but seven billion lies"

    altalt
    Aerdrin: The Lost Heir of The Sky
    Fantasy · Kyato
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  • 3yr
    Replied to Solarium_Storm

    Not everyone has a royal forgmaster wand, you are kind of forgetting that the Ernas household is an OP family and that Orion loves his daughters enough to give them royal forgmaster wands regardless if they are forgmasters or not. Moreover, there is a disadvantage: having to hold something in their hands while performing spirit magic, true magic is all about performing multiple tasks at once. And who knows if the silvery kind of spirit magic is as powerful as conventional transparent of emerald green spirit magic.

    Ch 1060 The Seventh Element (Part 2)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 3yr
    Commented

    I wonder what it is that affects the color of spirit magic, we've seen invisible spirit magic, emerald green, and the silvery spirit magic of Quylla. How are these three different from each-other?

    Ch 1060 The Seventh Element (Part 2)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 3yr
    Commented

    The fact that Morok is awfully honest with everyone he meets, and that he is rude to everyone, just serves to underline just how much he respects Quylla. It would be a massive plot-twist if Quilla somehow becomes enamored with him, or better yet, if Quylla makes Morok submit to her, like Jirni subordinated the uncontrollable Manohar.

    Ch 1075 Core Principles (Part 1)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 3yr
    Replied to Isal_Guillermo

    Faluel may be kind, but her training is ruthless lol. Also, becoming her harbinger doesn't exclude the possibility that she will awaken.

    Ch 1075 Core Principles (Part 1)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 3yr
    Replied to CrazyBookworm

    And what about Manohar? It just might cause a heart-attack to his superiority complex, if heart-attacks weren't beneath him.

    Ch 1080 Light Mastery (Part 2)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • 3yr
    Commented

    I believe light mastery could have interesting applications with Forgemastering, and just spell casting in general. I'm looking forward to see how it goes from here.

    Ch 1080 Light Mastery (Part 2)
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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