Feels a lot like chatgpt, though the premise is probably the authors. The feel of chatgpt enhanced writing is a bit monotone when you read it a lot

Use less chatgpt it feels repetetive

Sounds awfully lot like you put this through chatgpt and told it to make every sentence long and detailed. Bit annoying

More paragraphs to make it easier to read would be appreciated

Why did some of this suddenly come ogf as first person

Author says so either in novel desc or their profile desc

Hmmm, this is not english

I quite enjoy it, some writing issues here and there else it seems quite decent. Only read till chapter 21 though so might have less errors in later chapters.