John_Whitley

Over all a great story, the only thing that bugged me was the transition from natural English to robotic English. the main character has had years of speaking normally but after getting smarter he started sounding like Sheldon... and in turn the author started making everyone sound like Sheldon by accident. if the author would go back and fix the speech pattern of everyone except Sheldon it would be easier to read.

wait, wait I just realized something.... the shadow clone just divids the chacra and they all have the same body strength...... dose that mean he can punch with the strength of multiple whitebeards?

Im loving this, im glad he is not going for huge power up, and being methodical with it. I just wish the chapter pace was faster. not that I am rushing the author.

Thanks for the chapter. I just want to point out all the characters are monologing like the villains are supposed to do as the point out,lol.

I may not read the most, but I do read alot. out of all the stories i am reading this is the story I have the most hope for. it took two relatively simple stories and combined them, and made them more layered. I truly cannot wait to see how this progress.

Lucifer tv show it will much more balanced and if you include the weaknesses from supernatural make it more believable. Over all I dont think decker would make much of a difference except an introduction point.

this is what a Naruto story is supposed to be like . the beginning is supposed to be about fun and growth.

This is going to be one interesting story, anything the Addams are in turn interesting and crazy.

thanks for the chapter I can't wait to see how you balance out who is going to be in the classes, and how the relationships form. in the Manga it was pretty much organic; while in the anime it was mostly paired. you are good with unconventional groupings that are either paired or in groups of 4.... excluding the MC who gets along with just about everyone.

great chapter I want to say something about the wezlys being a chaotic positive family and the addams being the opposite, but that isn't true they are purely chaos they can be your best friends and you might die or at least come close, but you know they will burn the world down if someone else hurts you.... maybe??? or give them a pat on the back if you can walk away from it.