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I know, besides tiers aren't absolute.
I have thought about doing what you suggested when l was thinking of what kind of faction he'll build but I was hesitant previously. Some factor that led me to hesitate in doing so is because of how vampire society works, currently, there are two factions in it. This will complicate things as one of those factions is led by a male while the other is a female leader. If they did take over and Raskreia were to lead the faction, there might be a rebellion. This led me to another reason, Vampires are prideful and overly arrogant â simple as that. If Raizel and his team were to try taking these guys over then highly likely, the vampires will fight back which once again topples the plan. I truly appreciate your suggestion, but it will not work. Though the thing about repopulating the noble race in DxD like how Devils reincarnate others to repopulate their race is possible. I won't spoil anything but just remember, it is a possibility so stay tuned. Also just to clarify things, the team will not stay as a small-scale organization. I had plans for that already and you can also see that It is growing rapidly.
Hahaha, facts
Interesting ideas, I had already had similar powers from two of the powers you mentioned. One is his ability to extract traits from blood and the other is something he already used but I haven't shown it yet. It's a power similar to the blood-human duplicate you mentioned. Without the op traits of course. Anyway, thanks for commenting though. I will try and incorporate these powers after some tweaking since technically, it is possible with Raizel's Blood Authority
That's excellent, with the ending in mind, you just need to fill up the plot before it. Though, you should delete your comment to avoid spoiling everyone on what's your plan.
You don't keep notes of future plot points?
He has a guard
I'm not an expert on these kinds of things so you can choose to ignore this comment. Regarding the sexual scene, it's okay right now but I think it needs slower pacing. Though I suggest not just "telling" or narrating the emotions, but "showing" them. Also, rather than telling them she moaned in pleasure, for example, show it by having her moan. Like this; "Ahn~" It's just more natural to read. Though like I said, it's just my opinions, no need to take them seriously.
Hahaha, no it will still be a 5Ă multiplier. That's the limit for the wish.
No extreme op wish remember? So he was just testing if that multiplier is okay, if he had gone further then it would have been limited still. So sane result, 5Ă is maximum multiplier.
When they reach 13 years old so it's still quite a bit before it happens.
Think of him as some overpowered Vampire-like being with authority over blood. Imagine freezing the blood in place or making it flow backward, etc, he can easily do those. He also has psychic powers like telepathy. And read Aura in the auxiliary chapter.
First of all, I really liked your work. What I wanted to ask was if I can edit the work because when I read it, I noticed some parts that are a bit confusing to some. It's just my selfish request but, can I get a copy of each chapter? We can talk more in discord if you want. I just wanted to try and edit it to see if I can do something about it. I will send you the edited copy too. I just wanted to work on it and read the edited copyđ Also, I was thinking of working on a Kingdom fanfic too but with a DxD crossover. I've got a vague direction in mind and I think how you started this novel with the system and gifts to the mc is great. So I wanted on asking permission if I can do something similar about it to my planned kingdom fanfic. Especially the part where you have him given generals. I wanted to ask for permission since your work was what inspired me in wanting to do a kingdom x DxD fic. The setting is before dxd canon around the spring and autumn period or in the three kingdoms era. Thank you~
she died due to mc's idiocy
and in the manhwa Noblesse, Raizel watches and guards humanity along with the nobles so him part of Grigori kinda fits right?
Nothing like that
Its high school dxd. the ExE part is the last arc of DxD LN.
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